Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Armed with Wings Draft]

Actually, what you have is really good. The animation is smooth, and everything's reasonable well drawn, for what it is. Looks like you've got what it takes, and I look forward to seeing a real animation from you in the future!

In the meantime, tho...

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

And that's what makes this one such a big problem: it's COOL!! Now, everyone will want to send thru their unfinished bits and pieces, and I doubt they'll be anything like this.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores, which you don't want. I doubt this will get a crappy score, but when you get a finished one up, ...wow; I expect great scores!

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Keep working at it, and I know you'll bring us something great!

Good luck. :)

[Fat Cat]

OMG, get him lil kitty kat!! :O
:D

GingerPale responds:

He face plants, he is trying his hardest :c

[I am Papa]

It's ...ok. THere's just not enough to it. :\

How to put sound in Flash.
-Import the sound you want to use into your library (Import to Library).
-Make a new layer to put your sounds into. Sound needs a frame all to itself; if there's another object in the frame, it won't work, so make a new layer that's only for sound. I make 1 layer for music & sounds and one for voice & sounds. I've never needed more than 2 layers, but my flashes haven't been very involved yet.
-Make a new, empty frame where you want your sound to start.
-Drag the sound clip from the library and drop it onto the stage. Now, you won't see anything on the stage, but you should see the blue sound line in the frame on your sound layer in your timeline. If it's elsewhere, then another layer was selected (you can lock all the other layers to prevent this). If it's nowhere, then something was done incorrectly.

Now, you want to do 2 things.
1. In the options in the Properties box, change the 'sync' to "Stream" instead of "Event." What this does is it plays the sound when you play the flash and stops the sound when you stop the flash. "Event" will play the entire sound clip, even if you stop the flash.
2. Your sound will only play in the frames you give it (under the Stream setting), so in your timeline and on the sound layer, click the frame where the sound is and push F5 (Insert Frame) to expand the box (frame) that has the sound until it has enough frames to play the entire sound.

Go to my most recent news post for links to tutorials that'll help. :)

Demonty responds:

Thanks a lot C:
I'll try it tomorrow when it stops being 2 am and I can record sound without anybody yelling at me to shut up and go to bed

[PepperSweet 00]

OMG, what happens?!! :O

I did that once. I went to Dairy Queen in the snow. The sign said the lobby was open til 8:30 and it was only 8:00 but it was closed & locked. When they saw me, they all hid behind the counter and in the back. Then, I was determined. I kept knocking.

When they finally came and opened the door, I brushed past the guy and into the lobby, "whew, thanks! It was cold out there!" He told me the lobby was closed. I told him that if they'd have come to the door and told me to use the drive-thru because they had to close the lobby early, then I'd have been fine. But because they hid and left me out there, I wanted my order. Please.

The manager girl was stomping around. I probably delayed her from a hot date or something. The guy just still looked lost. Oh well, at least I got my order: a pee flavored Blizzard. :)

JK, I watched them closely as they made it so they couldn't screw with it.

I liked this animation, and can't wait for the next part!!

CartoonCoffee responds:

Hahaha I'm glad you were able to relate! I'm glad it all worked out with you and DQ

[United Scene 11]

It was good, but way too short. Can you tack the next part on to the end to make it more complete?

[A coin, please!]

English aqui! Aqui English por favor! D':
Quiero entender esto! D': Por favor!!

(google traducir) :)

[Women power]

English aqui, por favor. :/

NerdKats responds:

We are sorry by these time we are not aloud to creat the subtitles but in every video we writing the youtube direction so you can check the subtitles, the reason is that in youtube its easier to put the subtitles, thank u very much for your fav and please forgive us for every thing we cant solve by now

[Animal crossing Side A]

Ha! Ok, that was friggin funny. xD

[Animating To Extremes: Th]

Break each piece into its own 'episode' and submit it that way. Then you don't have to worry about buttons, or the length being excessive.

AnimatedCritic responds:

Yeah, didn't think of that. Seems a bit cumbersome, though - wouldn't it be easier just to go over to youtube? Not sure..... thanks for sharing, though!