This has potential, but it's so unfinished, it's nowhere near ready to be put up. Please finish cuz it looks cool!
This has potential, but it's so unfinished, it's nowhere near ready to be put up. Please finish cuz it looks cool!
Actually, it was pretty good. The main problem I see, is that since it was converted with Swivel, it doesn't loop like it would in Flash. Seeing as the theme of the Jam was Loops, I think it's kinda important. Can you exchange it for a looping version? It'd suck to see this one not be included due to not looping.
Thanks for the tip. I hope it's better now.
Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.
If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.
The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission
Good luck. :)
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