Actually, it wasn't bad. ...until the flashing part at the end. Change that.
Actually, it wasn't bad. ...until the flashing part at the end. Change that.
Ohh,you mean the seizures?
Okay,I will remove them as soon as I can.
Actually, it was a great intro. Unfortunately, it's an intro to nothing, tho. Since there's no episode with it, it's like turning on the Simpsons, and having the station turn off the show after the opening credits. A disappointment, y'know?
Yes, it's good, but please don't submit parts and pieces. We wanna see the whole thing!
thanks for the feedback i fought that part by part was i great ideal well the episode is 65 %done by now so thanks again
Haw! I wanna go play RollerCoaster Tychoon now!! :D
Although I don't understand it all, it was still cute. You had a decent score until the screaming at the end. :\
Actually, the worst part about it was that it wasn't finished. What was there was not great, but was not bad, either. Yeah, it needs sounds or music, but that's forgiveable. But submitting unfinished stuff is a waste of everyone's time. :\
What you have is pretty decent and it'll be interesting to see what you have for us in the future. But this is not complete, and without a story or plot with it, it's a pointless submission.
With that being said, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.
If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.
Also, at the bottom of the drop-down menu on the Games/Movies/Audio/Art tabs at the top of the page, there's an option for "Team Up!" That's where people come together to find voice actors, artists, writers, etc. That's also a good place to get ideas. Post your link there and find a writer to help with the ideas.
http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission
Good luck. :)
Okay, that would make more sense.
Thank you so much!
Actually, that was great. :D
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