It's a good start, I suppose. Keep at it. :)
It's a good start, I suppose. Keep at it. :)
The animation is good. BUt why is it so mall with all that white space around it? Can you adjust the dimensions toget it to a better size?
That's weird, I just noticed that... The original file isn't like that. I think something is going wrong with the VCAM... this is weird.
As a picture, this gets a 4. As an animation (movie), it gets a 1. This would make a great GIF to be submitted to the Art Portal. But as far as a story, with a plot and sounds and characters and music, well, it's lacking all of that, and you did submit it to the Flash Portal, not the Art Potal. My best suggestion would be just that: publish it as a GIF and submit it to the Art Portal. You're heading in the right direction to make great animations, so stay with it.
As art, this is great. As a movie, I gotta say no.
Black & white & totally groovy! :D
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