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[MashPlanet ep.#1: Bank wo]

This one's better tha the first one. The biggest issues are the storylines and the volume control.

The story on this one was scattered, but still kinda humorous. Still, the stories in your submissions are in need of more meat. I suppose that may come with time.

One thing that can be quickly addressed is the volume. The intro is loud; the general talking is fine, or sometimes quiet, and then there's the into-the-mic screaming and sound effects that are not only loud, but often very annoying.

If you want to scream for something, fine. Just, back up from the mic a bit when you do it. You'll get the right pitch, without making it sound pretend, but you'll also avoid the volume spike. Then, check your audio. If it still spikes and bottoms, then adjust the levels in Audacity to even them out.

Don't give up. Keep working at it. With time and experience, you'll gain a lot of traction.

MashPlanet responds:

Thank you so much for the motivation dude! I'll work a lot harder!

[The Beauty of Fall]

Well, the sounds are nice. The scenery is very basic, but nice...ish. The main problem with this is that there's really nothing going on after the first 5 seconds. :\ ...well, the leaf falls, but that's not enough to garner any interest in it. :\

[FML-FTW Animation]

It's a good start, I suppose. Keep at it. :)

[Chat In a Hat]

The animation is good. BUt why is it so mall with all that white space around it? Can you adjust the dimensions toget it to a better size?

2Fraimz responds:

That's weird, I just noticed that... The original file isn't like that. I think something is going wrong with the VCAM... this is weird.