Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Blobgame Demo]

Don't use Shift! It's a system key. Use regular keys: WASD, SPACE, and arrow keys.

[Feed the Mouse]

The game works, but here are the problems I found:

1. The game really needs music.
2. Is that the best "mouse" you could come up with? It looks awful. Please don't let your children design your game.
And this is the biggest one:
3. There are ads every 3 level-starts! That's TOO MANY ADS!!

For these reasons, I gave you a 1/5 review, and a 0/5 score.

Please consider the enjoyment factor of your games. Graphics, sound, music, and animation are important. Over-populating the ads also diminishes the fun-factor of your submissions. A game that isn'f fun will NOT bring in ad revenue. Think about it.

[Games for the blind Test]

The idea is good, but the implementation needs work.

The danger sound doesn't assist the player at all. Therefore, make it a sound that adjusts based on how close to danger one is. Metal detector sounds, not the monotone ones, but the variable pitch ones could indicate danger.

Also, you could have music playing when the person in on the green track of the maze. When they get off the track (even veering to the side of a straight section of track), the music drops based on their distance away (and not too far off the line or it's easy to get lost).

[Devotion]

Wow! That was 100% awesome! :D

[Curve Drawer]

The idea is good. Proficient flash artists should do well on this.

It's not really "relaxing" without relaxing music, though. Add some appropriate music and you'll be much better off. :)

[Epic War Saga]

Sign in to play?

That's just what I need; another password and account to remember.

Sorry, no 'play as guest' for me, no score for you.

Sux, too, cuz I like your games.

artlogicgames responds:

its easy register no need to confirm :) . SOrry we waiting for tom to integrate with NG login , but takes too long to wait his responds .

[Matt's Anime Tutorial]

This is quite helpful. :)

[xWorld]

This is not a game; this is a room. There's not enough here to submit it. You have one room inside and one room outside. There's nothing to do outside. When you re-enter the same 4 enemies are bake, but I had another 'me' in there as well.

Please don't submit unfinished things. It sounds good. It looks good. There's just nothing to it, and that's not what Newgrounds is for.