Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Clockwork Gentleman]

Wow! That was fantastic! :)

Marcomatic responds:

Thankyou Exedor!

[Gaucho fencing]

Increase your frame rate and take LOTS more pictures! These are WAY too choppy. :\

Thaiel responds:

Yep, i got confussed and changed the settings. I thought it was time per pictures, but it was the other way around, so it kinda fucked up.

[Cinco de Gayo]

The voice acting is really good for Frogman. Some of the others are kinda quiet, tho. The animation seems to be all frame by frame, and it's actually pretty good. I was really enjoying this one. Then, when the old guy came out and the potty humor started, while I wasn't impressed, I can roll with it. Until the last scene. Yeah, I gotta agree with JoltMasta on this one. It was pretty good, but the experience was soiled a bit by the, uh, ...sour cream! :D

artistunknown responds:

Totally understandable. I won't be doing anything this adult for a while, not that many benefits to it XD. Sorry the sour cream spoiled for you :p. Ah well, thanks for the review! Oh, and I'll try to fix the quietness of my mic, I might have to invest in a blue yeti now, heh.

[Mothrich - Boot (ep 2)]

The story isn't really interesting, but that's not the biggest problem.

The thing that kills this is the movement. Having a slight twinge or shift to the lines is fine, but when you make the changes too big, it makes the piece hard to watch, and that's what you've got here. The difference between the 2 drawings that create the shifting effect are too varied and it makes it hard to watch.

Try to keep the pics fairly similar, but with only slight differences.

Mothrich responds:

Hi and thanks for your criticism. There are 10 episodes. The story is more relevant starting with ep 2 to ep 10. I can upload only 2 vids per day, sry for that.

BR,
Mothrich