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[LunaRose 1-7]

Is this going anywhere?

So in 7 episodes, all they've managed to get done is meet each other, meet some other people, go to town, and arrive at the amusement park. Please speed it up. All they do is talk for most of each episode.

My thoughts so far:

1. The biggest draw to this is the sexy way you drew the women. At least we can look at them as we're waiting for SOMETHING to happen.
2. The pace is way too slow. Please speed it up and have them actually DO SOMETHING.
3. Please change the 'doorbell' sound as you hit the buttons in the beginning!!
4. Watch the volume. The background music is often loud enough that it makes the people hard to follow.

I used to say "Oh great! Another one!" but now it's "Oh great, what now." :\

Crintleod responds:

I would like to change the doorbell sound, but it's just so much of a hassle. I will probably do it sometime soon.

I will turn down the music also.

I am uhm... sorry about the very slow pace. I suppose I did make the conversations go a bit too long...

Sorry to say, but most of this episode is talking since it is the character's vacation and the episode is 14 chapters long so yeah. But due to your comments, I will definitely make the next episode much more action packed.

Thanks for your constant feedback.

[A song about lag!]

Sorry.

I get the point, and the joke, but there's a difference between joking slowly and wasting my time, and this was wasting my time. The load bar went too slow. The blue screen was supposed to be the "oh, so close, but noooooo" moment, but by the time it got there it was too late for it to be funny. Was there ever a song? I shut it off. When the blue screen came up, you should put in the "Fail sound" from the Price Is Right. You can find it on the internet. That would've been funy. I heard no song or sound, so I shut it off cuz I was bored. Sorry.

snowbodys responds:

The point of it is a song that wont load. -.- so plz learn to take a joke

[Amphibians From Outer Spa]

Hey, Newgrounds is for animation.

This isn't bad, but Newgrounds is for animation. Youtube is for videos. :)

GuerrilleroHeroico responds:

Heh- I don't think that it's explicitely against the rules, but I understand. This was really just for fun and it's Clock Day.

[What is this Clock thing?]

Close.

From what I can tell, it started as a day where the clock crew wanted to submit as many clock-themed flashes as they could. Eventually, there were so many flashes coming in that you couldn't keep up with them all, so people started just voting without watching them so as to get their Protection points.

For those of you who don't understand about Blam and Protection points: When an item is new (called 'under judgement') it can be either protected or blammed (deleted cuz it sux). Votes of 2 - 5 count toward saving a flash. Votes of 0 - 1 count toward blamming a flash. I never use 1, cuz if I don't like it, I want it gone, so why give even a 1, y'know? I seldom give 5 either. I consider 5 for only the best works. Anyway, you get points if you vote correctly- voting in the good flashes and voting down the bad ones. If you vote to blam something, but it passes, you get no points. Same if you vote to keep something, but it gets blammed- no points. Higher points lead to higher ranks and voting power. And that's the problem with Clock Day.

With so many flashes coming thru, people couldn't keep up with them, so they started just voting everything in before watching it so they could get their points. Since people weren't watching the items, they started to vote in crappy stuff without knowing it. The nail in the coffin came when "Strawberry Clock" decided to see just how bad this 'vote without watching' thing was. He decided to submit a flash that was nothing more than a red B on a white background. Sure enough, it passed, and thus, you now have the legend of B and Strawberry Clock.

As for this flash, the words went by fast enough that they were hard to read. It'll pass, though. People have been voting 5 on most everything all day long. I voted 2's and 0's all day mostly, unless something was particularly good. Yes, I watched most everything. My eyes hurt! :\

;)

IceDragon64 responds:

Oh, dear. Such a lot of effort and so completely wrong! Where do you think you get your facts from? Everything you said about B/P is correct, but everything you said about the origins of SBC and the CC is completely round the wrong way!
If you don't believe me, or Wikigrounds, try reading the info on the Clock Crew collection, or do you not believe Newgrounds either?

An author submitted a load of crap under his alias, StrawberryClock. B was his third attempt to get a flash through judgment without any animation. As it mysteriously got through judgment with UNDER the blam threshold and got Totw, it was seen on the front page. A fan of SBC called himself OrangeClock and started the Clock Crew on the BBS. It all goes from there. Clock day came a year later and is otherwise everything you said it is.
So, thanks, you ment well, but undermined the whole purpose of my Flash!

Well done for judging all our Flash, but that lot all about yourself is not really what reviews are for.

[Lunarose 1-3]

They're going downhill. :\

The first one was good, but this one lost me.

The beginning music is awful. The doorbell sound effects need to go. The animation is good. The voices are good, but the pink girl needs to lose the accent. She's got a great voice, just not with the accent. It detracts from her character and is annoying. Normally, it's not ok to change a character mid-story, but I give you premission. It's ok. Go for it. Really. Have someone cast 'AccentGone' so she talks normally. :)

The story was good. But the characters' relationships and orientations were incredibly confusing in this episode. First they seemed married. Then no one seemed married, and they all seeemed to be going for other people. Then they all seemed gay. When the bad guy licked the blood off the slut, that was nasty. You crossed the line with that one. Not cool.

When I saw the first episode, I was looking forward to the next one. After watching this one, that's no longer the case. I hope improvement is coming.

Crintleod responds:

I changed the intro. Hopefully it's not as bad...

Changing the doorbell sound effects is too much of a hassle, but I will turn the volume of them down in future episodes.

The pink girl's accent does not detract from her character and I will not be getting rid of it.

The pink girl and the orange boy are the only ones married. THe rest is all joking around. I guess that can be confusing though...

The guy who licks the blood is the villain. His action being gross is kinda the point.