Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Indiana Jones Movie Facts]

Why would we subscribe on youtube when we can stay here? I find it funny and odd when new people show up and make such remarks. It's like going to Walmart and telling people to be sur they stop by Kmart and get a discount card. Why, y'know?

As for the animation, it was good. Twas very short, but good. :)

ZenithQuinn responds:

I love Newgrounds, which is why I'm uploading a day early here. I'd appreciate the support on Youtube though, as there's potentially a larger audience there but it's very hard to get started there.

Thanks for watching!

[[ Time ]]

...7 years? Well, it's about darn time you're back! :)

[Mickey Animation Test]

What you have is pretty decent, but where's the rest of the story? It's hard to rate a good, half-story. :\

ZackAttack1416 responds:

i am writing the rest but my computer hard drive is getting fixed!

[The Flying Machine]

It was actually not bad. The use of pictures instead of being fully drawn will affect your score. Still, not bad.

plasticapple responds:

I'll see what I can do with the backgrounds. Thank you! :)

[Worm Crawling In Me Kinda]

As a test, it's ok. As an animation in the Portal, it's lacking. It needs a story to make it complete, and 4 seconds is just not enough. What you have so far looks great, tho, so yeah, please continue!

With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or pointless submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Keep working at it, and make something great!

Good luck.

zeerock1266 responds:

Alright sweet, thanks