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[Stand up Comedy]

Though basic, it wasn't bad. The only problem, and the big question: you couldn't include the whole joke? That made no sense, and it wasn't really funny. This was your opportunity to sock in a great joke from somewhere and animate it, and everyone would love it, but this fell flat. :\

People might pass this, but I gave you a 0/5 for your score. Your score might pass, but it could've been so much better if the joke was good. Redo it and resubmit and see how much better it's received once it has a decent joke.

[The 2012 Election]

I couldn't understand what he said.

Kwing responds:

Okay.

[Sudden Attack]

Actually, noob or not, that was pretty good. With the exception of the sound, that is. The sound of the voicework really needs improvement. So, here:

Watch this one:

http://www.newgrou nds.com/portal/view/590285 (Remove the space)

It'll help. :)

Mrcoleman responds:

Ok. I'll check out the link.

[funny quotes #1]

One quote? Is it not playing, or is it just the one quote plus music?

You should check out Mistysentertainment's flashes. He's kewl too. For the most part, his flashes are really great. Send him a PM and maybe he can give you a few pointers, ok?

Also, I found the tags to quite confusing. You state that this is "mnb", but I don't see how it could be. Unless it's misspelled. This could easily be "mbn" hands down, but that's not what you listed. Am I missing something? Hope not, cuz mbn rox.

Hope that helps! :)

[City of Ash]

As a picture it's awesome! But as an animation, it's not. This belongs in the Art Portal. Put it there so I can 5 it, but as far as animation in the animation Portal, I had to give a 0 cuz there isn't any. They do allow animated GIFs inthe Art Portal. There, you'll get a 5.

Zakuga responds:

This isn't a GIF sorry. It's swf, if I could submit to art portal trust me I would of.

[preview]

"it will be done when its done!"

That's ok. No hurry. It's another Sprite A versus Sprite B in a random, unprovoked fight scene animation. Like we need more of those urgently. So, yeah, take your time. It's ok.

At least it's not another Sonic vs whoever fight. There are way too many of those. ...Although, at least there are Sonic animations on here that aren't fights. Come to think of it, I can't think of one Maple Story sprite animation that isn't a Sprite A vs Sprite B fight. Sure would be nice to have Maple Story animation with an actual story instead of a random fight.

[Dance of the Cygnets]

There's not much of a storyline, but I don't suppose there would be. That's some fancy footwork there, though. :)