Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Orbit]

What a fantastic story! Well done! :)

[For a friend]

It was cute, but needs a few more frames in places so the text doesn't go off before it can be read.

DankyTazz responds:

Aye thanks for mentioning that =3

[Second WIP]

It's actually a decent start in animation, but I've got to agree with the other review, too.

Please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[Jumping]

It's got a lot of area for improvement, but it's a nice start. It had a story, and it was fun. The sounds were good and comical. The artwork needs work, and I'd recommend adding a preloader so it doesn't loop.

TeamMetallicMusic responds:

That's the point. It should be like that. But thanks anyway! : )

[Predator X vs Megalodon ( By Red-H )]

Your work is improving. This is a nice improvement from your first submissions. You still have a ways to go to be able to make great things, and it'll take a lot of work. You can get good if you keep practicing, tho. Look at my news post for tips and tutorials that might help.

[Merida - Brave - Speedpaint]

That's the first time I've ever seen anyone start with the eyes. Interesting way of doing things, and great art!

[Someone Needed a Butcher]

Well, it's a decent start, but there's nothing to it yet.