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[The making of my Under the Surface drawing]

I hope you're not complete with your submission yet. That way, you can capture more.

This one is at such a bad angle that not much of the artwork can be seen. Plus, it's incredibly slow. If you can, I'd recommend placing the camera from a higher vantage point and have it looking down. Also, increase the speed to something higher than double speed.

The video will be more interesting when the details emerge faster, and when we can see the details that are emerging. ...and, some softer music might be a better choice. The current music doesn't really fit very well, and detracts from the enjoyment. :\

Willow2491 responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm working on a new work space and angle as I know this video is very crapy. I'm hoping to have more uploads in the future, of time lapses of my drawings but I'll definitely make sure the artwork is visible next time :)

[Artwork by Breeze Canyon]

Feel free to make more art. As for videos, however, the music was horribly annoying, and the video was absolutely dizzying. :\

[Working on something (coming Nov. 2 also sorry for the looping)]

Don't try to make it 20 minutes; try to make it good! If you make it good and it ends up being 20 minutes, fine. But if you try for a timeframe, you'll put in filler, and 20 minutes is a long time to sit thru filler on a so-so story.

[Primordial Dancing | Animation Process | COTMOPEN]

I find myself watching :20-:23 over and over. That's very helpful.