Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Smithy]

Your work is really well done. These ...teasers really don't do it justice, tho. I can't wait to see a real animation from you! It should be fantastic! :)

AustinLabarbera responds:

Well thank you! I appreciate the feedback. I had to upgrade my machine just to render this, haha. I am working on a few scenes at the moment. Thanks for checking it out!

[Madness Test #2]

Not bad, but yeah, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. After all, if people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want, and there are plenty of Madness themed threads. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[BaseballFail]

It's a good start. The action is too too fast to tell what's going on. There should be a slight pause (more of a pause) between the time he lets go of the ball, to the time he gets hit so it's not one action, but two. That give the viewer time to process what's going on.

Also, there's not really much of a story, so it's not really ready to be submitted. It's a great example of what you'll have for us eventually, so definitely, keep at it!

[UP AND ABOVE]

Well, that was fun. :3

[Omega: Episode 1]

Aw, yeah. Dis is cool. Can't wait for the next one. :)

[Just Drive]

I don't understand. Did you do the animation yourself, or did you edit the animation and audio together? It's very smooth animation, but it says Cartoon Network at the top, so I'm unsure.

JewelzMiles responds:

Hey Exedor, yes I did the animation myself using Toon Boom Harmony. I added the Cartoon Network logo in there to pay respect to the owners of the characters (Tommy & Gus) Hope that clarifies things for you