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Sorry, but your games are basic and frankly, not that good. Steam tends to produce games like this. You can put together a working test quickly, but you need to put real effort and time into your games to make them something to be proud of.

If you did not create it, do not submit it.

You can't take Steam tutorials and post them Create your own stuff, bro. And, don't submit every little completed test or template you download.

Shovelware.

This is just a tutorial or template.

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials or templates. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation. You added nothing to this. You even removed the general assets of the bird and pipes.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. You added nothing to this game.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

The physics are an improvement over the original. The bullets are a a bit slow. The biggest problem with this one, tho, is the size. It's too big for the screen. You might want to shrink the dimensions down to a more manageable size; maybe 30% smaller.

Nytrik responds:

Thanks for the suggestions. I fixed the issue with it being too big so hopefully it's a bit more playable now.

Do nor resubmit items that have been blammed by the Newgrounds community without significant changes and upgrades.

Please don't submit games that took only 10 minutes to create.

And, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

A-Vonk responds:

Sorry i tought the game was on private xD

This is a Construct tutorial or template.

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials or templates. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation. You added nothing to this.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. You added nothing to this game.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

A-Vonk responds:

I tought it was on private srry xD

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