Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Astro-Jump!]

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls ...mostly work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. The space bar causes the screen to slide down, putting the game out of view, so one suggestion, UP to jump! Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it might be removed.

This has been submitted MANY times by others before you, albeit in a more basic form. The music was nice. :)

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck.

[super alien adventure alpha 2]

This is nowhere near ready to be submitted.

[Zombie Hunt 2D free game]

This doesn't seem to be working. There's no game here.

[seneca villagev1.1]

This is not ready to be submitted. Please do not submit tests to the Portal.

[Windows Errorista (BETA)]

The Windows spoof line died out years ago. Seriously.

[GAME]

This is a template game. It was created with assets provided by Construct, and really all you have to do is lay out the levels. It's a good way to start and get your foot in the door, however, it counts as a tutorial and will be removed.

Keep at it and create all your own assets and your own game.

[Gamus]

This is a template game. It was created with assets provided by Construct, and really all you have to do is lay out the levels. It's a good way to start and get your foot in the door, however, it counts as a tutorial and will be removed.

Keep at it and create all your own assets and your own game.

[Midnight Dice]

So, basically, by the end, you have to get and keep at least one 1 and one 4, or you're disqualified. After getting both a 1 and a 4, whoever has the highest score at the end is the winner. Since there are no instructions, how close am I?

JinxSpell responds:

You're correct! I've played it so much, I forgot to include instructions. I'll add them now, thanks!

[ZombieSurvival]

The game's ok. It's better than a lot of the tutorial games that impatient kids submit.

With that being said, this is a tutorial game, and will be removed. Tutorial games are not allowed because you're not creating your own game, you're following instructions on how to recreate someone else's game. This game, or versions of it, have been submitted many, many times already.

Keep creating, and make something new with a lot of your own content. You got off to a good start. :)

[3370 Project]

Please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed?