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This is nowhere near ready to be submitted. Please don't submit tests, template games, and pointless demos to the Portal. When it's more than half done, it can be submitted as a demo. For now, it's not ready.

This game is not ready to be put up. This is a template on Scratch. You can't lose as no spikes ever hit the player. Please revise and complete games before submission.

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This is a pointless demo. There's nothing to do . It's nowhere near ready to go up.

This is a Stencyl tutorial or template.

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials or templates. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. You added nothing to this game, and this has been submitted MANY, many times before.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

A few things:

1. Please don't submit tests. There's nothing to do in this.

2. Don't use Nintendo assets in your games. They're really picky about that.

The controls work, and the music is decent. You just have to make things all your own.

This is a tutorial game. You added nothing to it, and it's poorly executed.

This is nowhere near ready to be put up. I can't give a good score.

Please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums. That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

Shovelware.

The problem with Chocobreak, is Chocobreak.

First, please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. Nothing was added to this.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. However, the main problem with the Chocobreak template remains, and that is that the ball moves in unnatural ways. Clickteam unfortunately hasn't done anything about it over the many years that this has been around. That's something you have no control over, tho. This game has already been submitted MANY times already, tho. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

This is a pointless demo, and really has no redeeming qualities. It's a shame that it passed, and I'm not sure why. please put more effort into your games before submitting them.

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