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[j3x Dress Up Game]

Well, it's not bad. ...I think. It's just way too small. And, it's unrefined. You could easily rearrange the clothes boxes to fit within the white space. Then, fill any left over white space with color so it looks better. Also, don't cover the image of the person like that with the clothes boxes. It looks cluttered and thrown together.

With a little refinement, this could be ok. Remember; no one decides when the game is complete but you. If you submit it looking wonky, what does that display about you to the world? I you submit it when it looks great, what doe s that say? ;)

[uber tank war beta 1.03 [UPDATE]]

This is nowhere near ready to be put up. Please don't submit tests to the Portal.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>"Jump to Forum"). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[Extreme parkour v.01]

This does not work.

[Walky]

Well, all he does is walk, and that's not a game. It makes this a pointless demo, and thus, this will be removed. Continue, and put effort into it and make something great. Please don't submit tests to the Portal, tho.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>"Jump to Forum"). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[Elf Girl Puzzle]

Shovelware. This is a template where all you did was add an image. Please put effort into your games and create something good, not just a poorly conceived clone game.

[Zombie Killer Beta]

This is not a beta. It is not a game. It is unplayable. Please do not submit tests to the Portal.

[Christmas Eve Puzzle]

Shovelware. Please put effort into your games and create something new, rather than submitting these clones that take no effort at all.

[GUI Examples]

This does not seem to work. The title menu comes up, and there's music, but nothing else. :\

[lady of death]

Only submit one version at a time.

[BMX Winter Rooftop]

Shovelware, Vitalitygames. You should know by now.