Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Practice Toons 1]

Wow. That was actually more of a sllide show than an animation.

Being new at flash is fine. We all start there. Go to my most recent news post for tips and tutorials that might be helpful.

With that being said, please don't submit "cruddy stuff" to the Portal. If people submit cruddy stuff, then this will become a cruddy site.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

Saikex responds:

So use the Dumping Grounds for this kind of work. Got it, thanks.

[MMD First Pokemon Battle]

Some advice:
Don't use Miku miku dance.
Don't use WMM.
Don't use GoAnimate.
Don't use Blender (until you're an award winning master at it.)

Find a copy of Flash on ebay. Older versions are cheaper. Then watch tutorials by Jazza; link's in my most recent news post.

Also, don't steal pictures from DA. It'll get your stuff removed. Your stuff has to be your own.

[Frog & Toad: NOT ENEMIES!]

Ha! This is like Rammstein does a kid's show! Love it. xD

[How to Animate with WMM]

How to animate in WMM:

Don't.

:)

[Added more]

What you have is good, but if it's not finished, it's kinda pointless to submit.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-i nformation/content-submission

[24Frames Collab]

I hate it when people review their own work in the review section and give 4's and 5's. Have some class and leave the reviews to people who haven't worked on it.

[Mario mushroom]

The voice acting was very bad. You should work on that.

:3

[Yolo the Duck]

If it's bad, don't submit it, y'know?

[Hot Bicthes]

Please do not resubmit things that have been blammed.

Nigkonun responds:

why?

[Cinco de Gayo]

The voice acting is really good for Frogman. Some of the others are kinda quiet, tho. The animation seems to be all frame by frame, and it's actually pretty good. I was really enjoying this one. Then, when the old guy came out and the potty humor started, while I wasn't impressed, I can roll with it. Until the last scene. Yeah, I gotta agree with JoltMasta on this one. It was pretty good, but the experience was soiled a bit by the, uh, ...sour cream! :D

artistunknown responds:

Totally understandable. I won't be doing anything this adult for a while, not that many benefits to it XD. Sorry the sour cream spoiled for you :p. Ah well, thanks for the review! Oh, and I'll try to fix the quietness of my mic, I might have to invest in a blue yeti now, heh.