Excellent music! Please upload this to the Audio Portal! :D
As for this submission, tho, it's in the Animation Portal, and we require that anything submitted there has to be animated, hence, the Animation ("Movies") Portal.
Excellent music! Please upload this to the Audio Portal! :D
As for this submission, tho, it's in the Animation Portal, and we require that anything submitted there has to be animated, hence, the Animation ("Movies") Portal.
If you didn't make it, then why are you submitting it? Don't steal other people's work. It's a fairly basic concept. It's also the rule:
- You must be the creator and owner of the content you are submitting.
- Your submission must not be a pointless "demo" or "preview" without any redeeming qualities.
- Do not submit pictures in a slide show format with no interactivity.
- Do not submit copyrighted ... photographs that you did not create.
http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines
The animation was basic, but passable. What's really hurting you is the sound quality. Watch this one: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/590285. It's by Ricepirate and it's all about how to improve what is the biggest problem here. I hope that helps. :)
That was my first attempt at animation like 6 months ago. I've since gotten mics and a decent recording area. I do appreciate the help though. I'm obviously still really new to the art.
Welcome to Newgrounds. The first thing you're going to figure out is that, since this is an animation site, including any real life video aspects is going to kill your score. There was some stop motion in this, and it was ok, but the amount of real stuff overpowered the animated bits. :\
This is something I was totally unaware of. Thanks for letting me know!
Welcome to Newgrounds. Newgrounds is a place for artists to submit animations, games, art, and music that they have created. If you have anything that you've created, please feel free to submit it, provided it does not violate the rules. If not, that's fine. Just enjoy what others have created. Slideshows are not permitted.
http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines
You're on the right track. But this was just a bit too scattered. Keep at it, tho. :)
Thanks, yeah eventually I'll work on something with a bit more direction.
Youtube? Or, you could bring the video here. Why go to youtube for something that can be viewed here, y'know?
This was good, but was very short and incomplete. Would love to see the full thing here. :)
Sure thanks for the critique
What did I tell you, Keyshawn?
If you didn't make it, do not submit it. It's a fairly simple concept. Really.
Newgrounds é para animações e jogos. Isso pode executar mal aqui. Desculpa.
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