Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Living the Game Ep: Pilot]

Newgrounds is for animations and games, not for vlogs or vlog reviews. That's better suited for youtube.

[A Fox Tale (Rough Draft)]

This looks like it could be a good story. However, it's not ready to be submitted yet.

- The art was good. The drawings were nice. The simple format is actually an acceptable way of doing things. That works.

- Animate it. This was too slow to be animation, and it dragged on. It was more like a slideshow, and technically, slideshows aren't allowed on Newgrounds.

-The music was great.

-Keep your hands out of the pictures. Also, try to keep the edges straight. When the pages are moving all over the screen, it's very distracting.

I look forward to seeing the finished version of this. :)

[Work It In Your Eyes]

Now, you do know that Newgrounds is a site for animation and games, right? Yeah, there's a reason that the other things you see around here are drawn.

This isn't Newgrounds material, but it'd do good on youtube.

[#WhoIsHotter ep 01]

Podcasts? No, thanks.

Now, you know that Newgrounds is a site for animations and games, right? Yeah, there's a reason that all the stuff you see around here is drawn.

Frankly, this is extremely boring, and not the kind of stuff Newgrounds is about. This would do better elsewhere. Try youtube. :\

[mattbuscus's sticks]

Once something has been blammed, don't resubmit it. It's against the rules and will get your submissions removed, and can result in you being banned form submitting.

[Red Team Poses (Topdown)]

Wow. That wasn't really much of an animation. And it looks like it's going to be part of a game...?

Being new at flash is fine. We all start there.

With that being said, please don't submit tests to the Portal. If people submit unimpressive stuff, then this will become an unimpressive site.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

[Clockwork Gentleman]

Wow! That was fantastic! :)

Marcomatic responds:

Thankyou Exedor!

[Kony In the House !!]

Removing and re-uploading only to get more views is cheating. Maybe it's not getting the views you want not because it's bad (it isn't) or because it's poorly done (it isn't) but maybe because KONY is both old news and uninteresting now (which it's both). Sorry, bud. Just sayin. :\

Plus, that's just what happens. SOme things stay on top for a long time, some fall fairly quickly. But everything gets old after a while. You have two choices: deal with it, or make something new. I suggest doing both. Don't ride your laurels forever. Keep at it and you'll keep a following. Nothing new just makes everything old.

michael3841 responds:

Very inspiring words. That's just what I needed. Thank you Exedor! :)

[Gaucho fencing]

Increase your frame rate and take LOTS more pictures! These are WAY too choppy. :\

Thaiel responds:

Yep, i got confussed and changed the settings. I thought it was time per pictures, but it was the other way around, so it kinda fucked up.

[Threads Of Fate]

Now, Newgrounds is for animations and games, but this would be great on youtube.