Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sleaze City Trailer]

This wasn't bad but it needs adjustment. Lower the level of the music so that the voices can be heard primarily, and the music is what it's supposed to be; background music. It was hard to tell what they were saying at times because the music overpowered the voices. It was like that throughout, not just at various times, like the rap part or what have you.

sleazecity responds:

Thanks for the review Exedor, I take the feedback on board. Think the main reason you can't tell what the characters are saying is because I was drunk when I recorded them all! Keep it Sleazy!

[Mama's Boy: Episode I]

There are benefits to "parts." This is too long, so I didn't watch it all. When I thought the story had gotten to the end, the intro started and I saw the time was 25 minutes. That's when I stopped. It's entirely possible to make something too long with too much or unneeded content, and that describes this. :\

Johnny-Mac responds:

Duly noted. Although this is no different than watching a full episode of The Simpsons online (and I run through hour long HBO shows like nobody's business) Then again, you're right, I should remember my audience here....

"Newgrounds.com AKA Short-attention-span Theater" :)

[Mother's Day]

Ha! That was cute. A little rough in places, but still cute. :)

Jeremyasdasd responds:

Wow, Thanks A Lot! :)
I'm still working it out and It's sort of rushed and I don't really know Flash Well and I suck at Drawing X) But thanks for the Feedback :)

[Mr. Merda]

The music and premmise was interesting, but wwhen you had him start peeing, you lost all credibility and most of the score. :\

[Waves (My second flash)]

While I can't say that this flash will ever be in my favorites, I can say that the review below mine is absolutely mean and off base, and has been flagged as such.

Your work is noobish, bet that's to be expected for noobs. We all have to start somewhere. I've got some tips and tutorials in my most recent news post that might be helpful.

With that being said, you don't have to submit things when you know they're noobish. If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but if you submit them to the Portal, you'll get an account full of blams, low scored submissions, and/or reviews like the one below this one that will be removed soon.

Another option is to post it in the Forums. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

ErikBurmeister responds:

thanks for the feedback I'll definitely do that next time xD
Even though I know they're bad I just wanted to post them kind of as my progress bar.
I have tried to improve upon every next flash I make.
As always I appreciate the kind words and I thank you so much for it! :D
check out my most recent vids. :D let me know what you think! :D

[Dishönöred]

It's not deleted until you 'unpublish' it.