Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Personal Space - *Teaser*]

This definately has potential. It loos and sounds good. This just didn't really have much of a story, which is why teasers are usually a bad idea. Can';t wait to see more involved things from you, though. :)

[FP]

Actually, what you have is not bad, and indicates that you have the ability to create great stuff. The problem with this, though, is that it's unfinished.

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission (Remove any spaces)

Good luck.

[The Calculatron]

This was actually pretty cool. You had a really good score. ...until he lost his clothes and activated the penile cannon. :\ Yeah, um, not cool. Still a passing score, but the penile cannon deflected off the human guy's energy blast and ended up hitting your score instead.

ManimeInfinite responds:

Since I had no script to work with I would just animate stuff as I went on, which would explain the rudolf von stroheim, and some other anime references