Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FP]

Actually, what you have is not bad, and indicates that you have the ability to create great stuff. The problem with this, though, is that it's unfinished.

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission (Remove any spaces)

Good luck.

[The Calculatron]

This was actually pretty cool. You had a really good score. ...until he lost his clothes and activated the penile cannon. :\ Yeah, um, not cool. Still a passing score, but the penile cannon deflected off the human guy's energy blast and ended up hitting your score instead.

ManimeInfinite responds:

Since I had no script to work with I would just animate stuff as I went on, which would explain the rudolf von stroheim, and some other anime references

[COSMOS]

Hi, and welcome to Newgrounds. You must be new around here. Now, you do know that Newgrounds is a site for animation and games, right? Yeah, there's a reason that the other things you see around here are drawn.

The occasional 'real video' does come thru, but the score usually suffers here, because we prefer to stick to animations and games.

Newgrounds is a site for animation. There may be a few videos here and there that go against that rule but generally all videos on the site are some sort of animation. If it's not already, then I suggest you upload this to sites like Youtube or Vimeo and see how you do there, but this isn't Newgrounds material. :\

neonbohemian responds:

Hey Exedor!

Thanks for the info. Honestly, I have it uploaded to Youtube and Vimeo, however constructive criticism isn't something that is common on sites like that. I love newgrounds simply because almost every comment is constructive criticism. Also, I wanted to have the chance to give credit for the music I used which is from Newgrounds. I've always come to the site but never created an account till now.

[Benji Vs. Kyle Intro!]

Actually, it was a great intro. Unfortunately, it's an intro to nothing, tho. Since there's no episode with it, it's like turning on the Simpsons, and having the station turn off the show after the opening credits. A disappointment, y'know?

Yes, it's good, but please don't submit parts and pieces. We wanna see the whole thing!

OfficialBlueBen responds:

Uh, you may not know but this is an intro for my youtube series linked here! - https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL1rzI7rnQ2huzAJQiC6VUEmRZqwAvfQwh