Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Episode 12 part 1]

Your intro is way too long. It takes up the first 2 minutes of the piece! I'm sure that this is negatively affecting your score. Two minutes of every episode is re-run. Think about it. Do you want to watch the same thing over and over? Neither do your viewers.

AS for the rest of it, sorry, but it's dull. Sprite loops that mimic game moves and stay just a touch longer then they should. Speed things up a bit. Not your framerate, but the action. We don't need to see Luigi walking for 2 seconds when 1 will do. A second is not a lot, but when every charcter stays longer than they should it makes the piece drag, and this drags a lot. :\

Holding your viewer's attention is vital, and this is a struggle in it's current state. :\

[Patches]

Sorry, but you're mistaken. They meant NO live action, not more live action. Newgrounds is for animations and games, not live video. Live video will tank your score.

strangeapparatus responds:

I'm sorry you feel the need to 'tank' the video based on your conservative view points for newgrounds. Also, I'd appreciate it if you didn't put down other viewers on my video pages.

[Truth Is What You Believe]

You have it completely backward.

The truth is the truth regardless of whether you believe it or not.

[Whatcha Thinkin' Bout?]

Sorry, but that made no sense. :\

[Team Desu]

There should be a button at the end where we can rewatch the transformation sequence again. :3
And again. :3
And again. :3

[Game Grumps Animated]

Actually, it wasn't animated. It was more of a slideshow. :\

There are lots of entries like this, but they have at least a few moving bits in them, whereas this is ...yeah, a slidehsow. It's also very short. Pick another clip a,d make some good stuff. :)

combatwhale responds:

thanks! I appreciate the constructive criticism. This was, as you may have guessed, my first upload to newgrounds and I was just excited to see how it all works around here. Just seeing the views and the ranking bob up and down has inspired me all over again, and you can bet my next animation uploaded here is going to be much more...well animated. (Hopefully even more entertaining too) :D