Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Mario? "Troll"]

Do not resubmit submissions that have been blammed by the Newgrounds community. It's the rules, y'know?

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

[Easy Love]

Hi, and welcome to Newgrounds! :) You must be new around here. Now, you do know that Newgrounds is a site for animation and games, right? Yeah, there's a reason that the other things you see on here are drawn. I think that's what the first reviewer was getting at.

The occasional 'real video' does come thru, but the score usually suffers here, because we prefer to stick to animations and games.

Newgrounds is a site for animation. There may be a few videos here and there that go against that but generally all videos on the site are some sort of animation. If it's not already, then I suggest you upload this to sites like Youtube or Vimeo and see how you do there, but Newgrounds tends to prefer animated material. :)

[Abel The Giraffe - Episod]

You had a decent score until you put in the volume spikes.

TVpartystudios responds:

thanks for the advice, we are gonna re upload with more balanced sound soon :)

[Environment Animation- Pr]

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[Gallery #1 (Sept. 2014)]

You can submit your art to the Art portal, if you'd like. You can also post it in the Art Forums.

Unfortunately, slideshows are not allowed in the portal, and this has been removed.

[Iz á Pig Opening]

Well, it's ...a pig raising his hands... and that's all. This is nowhere near ready to be put up. There's just not enough to it It's an opening with no episode, and it's barely an opening.

With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Keep working at it, and make something great!

Good luck. :)

khancreations responds:

The opening always begins with a dream sequence. The only thing this was missing was a narraration, as noted in the description. Thank you for your feedback!

[NS: {S} Greg: Look up]

Well, it's good. ...but there's nothing to it. At all! It almost qualifies as artwork instead of an animation. As an animation, it's nowhere near ready to be put up.

With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Keep working at it, and make something great!

Good luck. :)

[A Superhero Dream]

Yes! Continue and get better. This was very basic, but I can tell that you're on your way to making great things, both by the aspects of the animation, and by the attitude you have. Keep at it. :)

[VS2 - Looters]

Actually, that was pretty good. There were a lot of parts that could've been shortened or sped up to save time, animation, and file size, tho. Like, the guy with the square glasses and the blue shirt was talking really slow. yeah, that may be how he does it, but it still slows the pace. And when Dan says he's got to go out for a while (3:40), once he stops talking, it takes him 11 seconds to exit the scene, which doesn't sound like a lot, but they're all just standing til he starts moving, and it's unnecessary filler. With a 20 minute long episode, there are people who will turn it off early cuz they can't dedicate the time, or they just want to move on. A shorter animation helps keep people engaged.

[Cue Ball]

You've been around here long enough, you should know how we view real video in submissions to the site. This does have animation, but still, you know how any amount of real video will wreck your scores. :\

The animated part was decent, but yeah, very short. Would love to see more fully animated stuff from ya. :)

KamikazePanda responds:

Thanks for a good review mate, although Im not really worried about a pesky number to keep track of things, I'll continue to let the work I do, speak for itself, wherever it may end up.
This was audience'd primarily for INSTAGRAM and I havent done any actual animation/story work for some time I figured I would share here. Thanks