You had a decent score until you put in the volume spikes.
You had a decent score until you put in the volume spikes.
thanks for the advice, we are gonna re upload with more balanced sound soon :)
Yes! Continue and get better. This was very basic, but I can tell that you're on your way to making great things, both by the aspects of the animation, and by the attitude you have. Keep at it. :)
Actually, that was pretty good. There were a lot of parts that could've been shortened or sped up to save time, animation, and file size, tho. Like, the guy with the square glasses and the blue shirt was talking really slow. yeah, that may be how he does it, but it still slows the pace. And when Dan says he's got to go out for a while (3:40), once he stops talking, it takes him 11 seconds to exit the scene, which doesn't sound like a lot, but they're all just standing til he starts moving, and it's unnecessary filler. With a 20 minute long episode, there are people who will turn it off early cuz they can't dedicate the time, or they just want to move on. A shorter animation helps keep people engaged.
You've been around here long enough, you should know how we view real video in submissions to the site. This does have animation, but still, you know how any amount of real video will wreck your scores. :\
The animated part was decent, but yeah, very short. Would love to see more fully animated stuff from ya. :)
Thanks for a good review mate, although Im not really worried about a pesky number to keep track of things, I'll continue to let the work I do, speak for itself, wherever it may end up.
This was audience'd primarily for INSTAGRAM and I havent done any actual animation/story work for some time I figured I would share here. Thanks
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