Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lemmy - Hyperspace]

You might want to hang out around here a bit more and learn what we do here before you submit things like this. Newgrounds specializes in animations, so this is more out of place than you know. And yeah, this won't get good ratings. Now, do you have any animations you'd like to submit? If not, give it a try!

[HTF: Smoochies: Cuddles]

If you didn't create it, please do not submit it.

[pokemon triggerd]

...and, this is a slideshow. :\

[Welcome to spartan base halo 3 Machinima]

Hi, welcome to Newgrounds. Newgrounds is a place for artists to submit work that they've made, like art, music, games, and animations. This may look like an animation, but it's actually gameplay footage (SFM) of a game you did not create, which means it's not allowed. Do you have anything you've created yourself that you can submit?

[WOL Gameplay]

This is not ready to be submitted, in either game form, nor animation form. The music is horrible. The gameplay looks dull and way too fast. As an animation, it isn't.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>"Jump to Forum"). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho, and this isn't an animation. It's really just a test run of footage of gameplay, which is not a valid use of the Portal.

Good luck. :)

[Halo Marine Tales]

Removed for use of copyrighted music. When mods remove something, it's best not to resubmit it, bro.

[Some Yo-Yo Stuff]

I like the music. The pixel man was kinda cute. You live right on the water? How cool is that?! The problem I have with this is the real life stuff. You've been on here long enough to know that Newgrounds specializes in animations and shuns real life video. Heavily enhanced real life video might stay, and even garner a decent score. This, however, was non-animated, and it will do poorly. Do you have any animations?

AustinJayCook responds:

Yeah i actually expected this, im sorry about this i just wanted to see if this would go well and test the waters with a small yoyo video.... Im actually very sorry i do know that its not an animation and ill be taking this video down today, and sadly not, animation is on my bucket list of things to start but voice acting comes first, one thing at a time, and thanks very much for your imput dude i wanted to see how this would go and you helped me understand what to do and what not to do here :)

[Disppointed Reaper]

Not bad for a start. Keep at it and keep improving and you'll be fine. :)

[funny]

Now, you know Newgrounds is a site for animations, right? You might want to hang out for a bit and see what we do here before submitting. ;)

[Chibi Intro]

It was very cute. It was only an intro, tho, and an intro without anything behind it, y'know, like an episode of something, are kinda pointless. So, I guess, this was cute and pointless. :) Please bring us an episode! :)

creativeblackmind responds:

Thanks for your feedback. Still learning tho! Will try my best to make a complete episode :)