We, I admire your tenacity, and yes, please continue! No one is good right away, so these are just steps toward getting better. And don't worry abut how many attempts it is; if everything made it thru, then there'd be a whole lot of crap on here, and then, where's the challenge?
Make more frames and poses. Switching back n forth between 2 frames is low quality and people will notice that.
The audio was ...well, I'm not sure how to describe it. It was dynamic, but at the same time, not entirely interesting. The mouth-in-the-microphone moments were annoying, as they always are.
Make a good story. So-so animation can be forgiven if the story is good.
Keep at it. Even Jazza's old work was so-so, but look how far he's come!
Go to my news post for tips and tutorials that'll be helpful. Also, watch and play things here on Newgrounds. The more you put into your mind, the more material your mind has to work with when coming up with new ideas.