Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Love story]

Nothing here is animated. I can't really give it a good score for animation when there is none. :\

[shnickerdoodles]

I wondered why the chocolate you sent this year was a little ...off. At least I found out before I finished the last of the box!

[Trick this Treat]

"Your submission must not simply be an ad for your site."

Your submissions comes pretty close to breaking this rule, there, Ms. Zombie. Please add a bit more to the content side with your next submission, ok?

ZiaZombie responds:

Oi... Seems like an ad? NOOOO it's a song! I'm guessing all that stuff at the end and the length of it give it that feel.

Hmmm.. What if I told you I've got my little animators and designers busy working on the first episode to my interesting tale? Once done, it'll be uploaded to here. 15-30 minutes or so. This is actually a piece of that story!

Cheers! (-;

- Zia

[The Window]

Please don't submit pieces.

This is very nice. I really like it, and yet it's a nice picture, but it's a pointless animation. You could submit it (the pic) to the Art Portal and it'd do well. But as far as being in the animation Portal, it's really lacking anything it needs in order to be here. Even if it had music, an occasional bird chip or fly-by, rain, deer walking thru, SOMETHING else to it, then it'd make a nice screen-saver-like relaxing piece.

See "MLP Rarity bath time" in my favorites or cut & paste this: http://www.newgroun ds.com/portal/view/582959 (remove the space).

It's a picture for the most part, until you realize that there are things going on all over the place. When combined with the relaxing music, you get a wonderful relaxing piece.

This sweet picture has the beginnings of something cool and relaxing like that, but for now, it's just a picture, and this isn't the Art Portal. It's the animation Portal, and this really doesn't have any.

SunshineAnBlackSheep responds:

Alrighty, thank you for your feed back, I'll remember your advice next time when submitting, which will hopefully be the full animation in a few weeks, anyway.

[EAM creation]

I'm not a darkminded person, so this really wasn't appealing or funny to me. The resolution was grainy. The singing wasn't bad, but it wasn't really good either. Sorry. :\

Now, you do know that Newgrounds is for animation and games, right?

The occasional 'real video' does come thru, but the score usually suffers here.

This is better suited for youtube. :\

[Optimus prime improv]

Newgrounds is for animations. ...you should know that by now. :\

Please go to youtube with this kinda stuff.

Now, if you wanted to submit this to the Audio Portal as a voice demo, that's be fine. BUt the lasat thing anyone wants to see is a sideways video of someone trying to imitate Optimus Prime. Never put your real face on, either! If you're trying to imitate someone, put in clips of who you're trying to imitate. It always sounds more like the character when they're on, and always sounds less like them when they're not. Also, if people don't like your looks, they'll hate your stuff.

[Musical Box]

"...lying around for ages..." ...?

Dood, don't do that! If you've got good stuff like this, it's a shame to leave it just lying around. :)

[HappyClockDay09F&S]

It's a nice picture... Art Portal, maybe?

[When Peeing]

All the kids: "Yeah! I dunno either, but it wuz funneh!"

All the young adult type people: "Yeah! That was funny! (...but it'll never happen to me.)"

All the mature adult type people: "Yup. :\ "

All the old people: "...what? How do I make it play? What? I have a mouse?! I thought I caught him last week...."

[Minecraft]

It's not bad, but it's not an animation, so it should go in the Art Portal. Save it as a GIF, not a SWF.