Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[war broke out in the midst of creation]

Hi, welcome to Newgrounds. Newgrounds is a place for artists to submit work that they've made, like art, music, games, and animations. Audio should be uploaded to the Audio Portal. This is where the animations go, and this isn't an animation. If you haven't yet, please upload the audio to the Audio Portal. As for this, do not expect it to do well, as Newgrounds caters to animated content. Do you have any animations you created that you can upload?

[Evaporating Eevees 1: Telescopic]

While the animation was beginner-ish, it wasn't horrible. ...for a beginner. The main issue was the audio. Having background music is a great idea, but it must not interfere with the main content. Having volume that's too high and/or vocals in background music will cause it to not mesh well with the foreground vocals, and this is the case here. Also, the audio quality of the voices was bad enough that I couldn't understand the green guy (with the telescope) at all. It's not necessarily the microphone, tho. Watch this one to learn how to improve your audio: https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/590285?id=590285 Hope that helps. Keep at it and you'll keep improving.

[axe]

This was submitted and blammed. Please do not resubmit things that have been blammed by the Newgrounds community.

[Doki Doki Literature Club - Alternate Ending]

No spoiler warning is ok, I guess. However, there was no warning about the E rated animation with the massively violent outro at the end. Might want to make a different one for E and T rated and use this for M and A rated submissions.

mohawkade responds:

Spoiler Warning in the Description

[Haunted Hospital Project #1]

Well, it's a couch, and some laughing, and really, that's it. There's nothing about story; there's no animation; there's nothing informational or plotwise about it. How can people give opinions on nothing, y'know? Add a synopsis, animation, characters, and then maybe you'll have a better chance.

iuidmiul responds:

Thank you for your response,i will add more details next time

[Double Standards]

The animation is ok, in a beginner kind of way. Keep practicing and you'll get better. The real killer for these, tho, is the sound quality. Watch this one:

https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/590285?id=590285

It'll help. Good luck. :)

[test]

If your test was to get something removed, you did it. Do not submit that which you did not create.

[Super Ghouls N Ghosts - Halloween Challenge 2009 (played by MRSHELTONTV)]

Hi, welcome to Newgrounds. Newgrounds is a place for artists to submit work that they've made, like art, music, games, and animations. This may look animated, but it's actually gameplay footage of a game you did not create, which means it's not allowed. Do you have anything animated that you've created yourself that you can submit? :)

[abc]

This is a slideshow, not an animation. Newgrounds is a site for animations. Do you have any animations that you've created that you can submit?

[The making of my Under the Surface drawing]

I hope you're not complete with your submission yet. That way, you can capture more.

This one is at such a bad angle that not much of the artwork can be seen. Plus, it's incredibly slow. If you can, I'd recommend placing the camera from a higher vantage point and have it looking down. Also, increase the speed to something higher than double speed.

The video will be more interesting when the details emerge faster, and when we can see the details that are emerging. ...and, some softer music might be a better choice. The current music doesn't really fit very well, and detracts from the enjoyment. :\

Willow2491 responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'm working on a new work space and angle as I know this video is very crapy. I'm hoping to have more uploads in the future, of time lapses of my drawings but I'll definitely make sure the artwork is visible next time :)