Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Evaporating Eevees 1: Telescopic]

While the animation was beginner-ish, it wasn't horrible. ...for a beginner. The main issue was the audio. Having background music is a great idea, but it must not interfere with the main content. Having volume that's too high and/or vocals in background music will cause it to not mesh well with the foreground vocals, and this is the case here. Also, the audio quality of the voices was bad enough that I couldn't understand the green guy (with the telescope) at all. It's not necessarily the microphone, tho. Watch this one to learn how to improve your audio: https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/590285?id=590285 Hope that helps. Keep at it and you'll keep improving.

[Doki Doki Literature Club - Alternate Ending]

No spoiler warning is ok, I guess. However, there was no warning about the E rated animation with the massively violent outro at the end. Might want to make a different one for E and T rated and use this for M and A rated submissions.

mohawkade responds:

Spoiler Warning in the Description

[Haunted Hospital Project #1]

Well, it's a couch, and some laughing, and really, that's it. There's nothing about story; there's no animation; there's nothing informational or plotwise about it. How can people give opinions on nothing, y'know? Add a synopsis, animation, characters, and then maybe you'll have a better chance.

iuidmiul responds:

Thank you for your response,i will add more details next time

[Double Standards]

The animation is ok, in a beginner kind of way. Keep practicing and you'll get better. The real killer for these, tho, is the sound quality. Watch this one:

https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/590285?id=590285

It'll help. Good luck. :)