Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Blazing haystacks]

The dimensions are all messed up and much of the game is off-scren. I watched the tutorial and still don't know how to play because of what's not visible. Please fix it.

slamirstudio responds:

hi, I just fixed it so you can try again

[Onomastica 2]

What a cool game! Needed the walkthru for the math part. The person who did the walkthru video had no idea what he was doing, You might want to redo that. xD

[Car Driver]

This isn't a game. There's nothing to do. There's nothing to explore. There're no quests, no story, no scoring system, no enemies, no obstacles to traverse, no time to beat, no timer at all, and really, no fun at all. This is not complete, obviously, and without anything to do, it's a pointless submission.

With that being said, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or pointless submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[maze race]

It needs a better turning radius. Many times, I couldn't turn well enough to miss obstacles. Also, add a REPLAY button!

BA4T responds:

thanks
radius of turn is hight = not a too easy game ;-)