Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Royal Battles Alpha v 1.3]

The game does not work. It sounds like it's still very incomplete, tho.

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

Oshani responds:

it is playable, we are uptading it but its hard when your really new to making games

[Picolour]

The game went straight to the "Level Failed" screen each time.

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[Schoolproject]

If it's unfinished, please don't submit it. :\

[Turn Now - Line Run]

The music is great, but you need a quick overview so people know what;s going on. Also, have the start be straight for just a bit longer before the turns start so people can be ready when they start to come.

[Wash Beauty]

Good pictures, but TOO MANY ENEMIES!!

zwltop responds:

Thanks for your suggestion, the enemy split time has been changed

[Aventuras de Mateus Beta]

What you have hints at something decent in the future, but this is nowhere near ready to be put up. There's just not enough to it yet.

With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)