Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Strategy Defense Colored Mine 2]

Too many enemies too fast!! All your games have been like this lately. Have you started drinking again?

[Islands 2.0]

Isn't this a Unity template or tutorial?

First, please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. Nothing was added to this.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. This game has already been submitted MANY times already, tho. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Also, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[ThresholdCCG Online]

Use "Play as a Guest" or something. I'm not going to sign up somewhere and get yet another username and password when I don't know what I'm getting (despite your descriptions). It should be able to play here without the need for third party whatevers.

[Islands]

Please don't submit tests, barely-there demos, or unfinished things. No one wants to play something like this. I'm not sure it's even playable.

[Pong Retro]

If he moves the same speed as the ball, then there's no way to beat him. And, it's Pong. Pong wasn't fun back then; it's not really any better now. Sorry. :\

[Super Smash Flash]

If you didn't make it, please do not submit it. It's a fairly simple concept.

Cthomas1486 responds:

is just a game, Exedor.

[My Flash Windows Trial Version]

Windows parodies are old, outdated, usually boring, and are generally not worth submitting anymore. You should try something new, better, and more interesting.

[A Long Walk]

Well, several things. It needs music. It needs instructions. Generally, the graphics were acceptable, but there was no story, and nothing to do. :\

keep at it. It just needs ...more.

[Test Shooter]

Isn't this a Construct2 template? Or a tutorial?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. This game has actually been submitted MANY times already. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

raidenslicer responds:

Thanks, Ill try to make my own thing next time, maybe a mario platformer, thanks as always.

[Space Warz]

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. That's not what it's for.