Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[My_First_Game]

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials or templates. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. You added nothing to this game, really.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[Jump into a hole!]

This is a Stencyl tutorial or template.

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials or templates. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. You added nothing to this game, really.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[Freddy's Toxic Nightmare]

Do not resubmit things that have been blammed by the Newgrounds community.

[Cat Slides And Messings]

Well, submitting games you didn't create isn't exactly going to help that, now is it. Do something you can be proud of.

[my flappy bird]

This is straight out of a Cyberix3D tutorial or template.

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials or templates. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. You added nothing to this game.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[Cute Psychic]

I can't play because it won't let me log in as a guest. I'm not making yet another username and password for yet another random game that I have no idea about anything about the game.

FisalMohamed responds:

we will consider the idea of guest account thanks for your preview

[Test]

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This does nothing, and is nowhere near ready to be put up. :\

[v0.0002]

Please don't submit tests. This is the same thing you submitted before. There is no game here. :\

[Zombie Shooter (WIP)]

No, adjust your setting to fit within the window. Why did you set this up at like 3500 pixels tall when most people have their monitors at about 1080 px tall?

Very little effort was put into this. Just because you made it from a tutorial and it seems to function does not make it a completed game. If you care, then take the time to put some effort into anything you submit. No one wants to play unimpressive games.

The lack of quality and effort, and the inattention to detail, in this case, not caring enough to make the screen resolution to where it fits normal monitor settings, seems to indicate that you do not care. This is why your version of Breakout was removed.

This game is not ready to be submitted, bro. :\

LarryQuartz responds:

It's work in progress and i just wanted to lay down the functions down before i make the graphics and everything, but i guess you're right it's not ready yet.

[Roll a Ball - Unity Tutorial]

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials or templates. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. You added nothing to this game.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)