Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[PaperPlanetBuster test]

Scratch produces some extremely sub-par games. Try Flixel if you really care about making a good game.

ticoticonofubatransf responds:

Well , thanks for the suggestion , but how the title of the game says , its only a test. To i know how oline games work.

[Defuse it!]

Having to download a manual to play is a poor choice. Instructions could be put in-game, or even in an in-game tutorial. Visiting other sites and/or downloading additional aspects in order to play is unacceptable.

[Dead Mars!]

Isn't this a Construct2 template or tutorial?

First, please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. Nothing was added to this.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. This game has already been submitted MANY times already, tho. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Also, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[Disc battle]

If you didn't create it, then please do not submit it. Newgrounds is for things that you've created yourself, not for templates and things you did not make.

[FlappyBird unity recreation]

Please don't submit things that come from templates. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you use templates, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what templates do. This game has already been submitted MANY times already, tho. Since it's a public file template, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own. :)

[Genarator Medals]

The thing about easy medals is that they also go away easy. These all will be removed.

[Garfield Pac-Man]

Well, actually, this is a downloadable template that you modified.

First, please don't submit things that come from templates. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you use templates, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. You did add the Garfield aspect, but otherwise, it was straight Pacman template. Submissions must be your own creation.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what templates do. This Pacman game (minus the Garfield add-ins) has already been submitted MANY times already, tho. Since it's a public file template, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

[Monster Shoot]

Well, actually, this is a Construct2 template or tutorial.

First, please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

Templates are similar, in that they're a basic game that's already set up with code and sprites, but you then have to go and add your own touch to it before it's considered finished. Nothing was added to this.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks ok and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. This game has already been submitted MANY times already, tho. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it will be removed.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Also, please don't submit unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. If you don't know, it's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished items, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[LIFE'S A GAMBLE]

Resolution 1920x1080 is way big for those of us on a laptop. I couldn't play it.

OutbackPixels responds:

Hi Exedor, thank you for your feedback. We have now reduced our resolution & extend an invitation to come & enjoy more than the ukulele music :)

[Little Knight (not Finished)]

Actually, it's very good for what it is. Unfortunately, it's not nearly ready to put up yet. Keep at it! :)