Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dayshift (2011)]

While it wasn't the most interesting story, it was really well done! :D

[L.O.L.a. Mask Test]

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. It wasn't bad, for what it was. I guess you succeeded, then. I haven't learned masks yet, but hopefully soon. :)

Whetsit-Tuya responds:

I didn't try to submit anything to a portal, I want this to only be in my channel.

[Arc Infinitum 3]

I've never had the slightest desire to support anything on Patreon. Until now. If I wasn't selling my bodily fluids to survive (literally), I'd support this with more than just a review. :)

[Caramelldansen Song with Figmas]

I like the idea. The execution was a bit too rough, tho. The main moves of the dance didn't come thru with the characters, unfortunately. And having the movement in the background made it a little disorienting. The choppiness of the foreground and the smooth background movements didn't mesh well.

Here's hoping you add some anime schoolgirl figures to your collection. :)

[Akira The Awakening]

It looks decent so far. But there's not enough to this yet. It's very short, nothing happens, even the title at the end is cut off.

Please continue, as it's coming along nicely, but please don't jump the gun and give us something that's not ready. That only makes you look bad.

[Kirby's Picnic [SHORT]]

Beans.

They're good for the heart, yo.

[Kalimaya speedpaint]

You did the intro, but you forgot the speedpaint part! xD

[The Dark Crystal Teaser]

Do. It!!!!

Why are you wasting time reading my review when you could be working on this awesomeness?!?!

Drawmill responds:

true words :)

[GMOD animation test]

Please do not submit tests to the Portal.

Please do not resubmit things that have been blammed by the Newgrounds community.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-and-movie-guidelines

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

nowaybackmachine1498 responds:

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lol

[Transparency (Teaser)]

Wow! The quality is awesome. There wasn't much of a story yet, but PLEASE continue!! :)