Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kerbal Space Adventure: Good People!]

It's ok. I'd suggest making the guy's mouth move, and adding some panel that gives the ship's voice a character. There's plenty of space on the control panel to add some flashing character light for the computer's voice. Having no mouth movement and no characters identifier for the ship leaves the story bland and lacking substance. :|

Granted, this may be the last episode for the ship(?), but I hope to see these changes in the future. It'll add more substance to the animation.

[removed]

This would do well in the Audio Portal. You should post it there. However, visualizers do not count as animations, and thus, this will be removed from the movie portal.

[Heathers VA practice]

You can, and should, upload the audio to the Audio Portal. As far as the animation goes on this, well, it's not animated, so being in the movie side of things isn't quite right.

Before you upload to the Audio side of things, I do have some suggestions.

There's a lot of echo to it. Watch this one: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/590285 and it'll show you how to clean things up. It's a fun and helpful piece, and you'll benefit from it.

Be sure you know your lines before you record, and if you stumble, re-record it until it's perfect. 'Real' voice actors have to redo many times since it has to be perfect, so redos are part of the game.

Keep practicing. That's what people do when they want to get better. You may not see the fruits of your effort right away, but eventually, you'll get there.

[The Anticentipede: The Film That Will Never Be Released]

The audio is ok. There isn't really any animation, tho. Not nearly enough to be considered for the movie Portal. You should upload the audio to the Audio Portal where it would be a better fir. It could do well there. But as for grading it on its animated qualities, it is lacking.

[B-COTMLOTH Work in Progress]

I know you need to have a WIP up for the contest, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the description or author comments on your finished work. That way, people see it and you have your link to your proof, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

This will be removed for this reason, but also for the use of copyrighted music.

Hope that info helps, tho.

[[HD] How to tame a Trike! [ARK SURVIVAL EVOLVED Tutorials #1] /w Zero Blitz]

Hi, welcome to Newgrounds. Newgrounds is a place for artists to submit work that they've made, like art, music, games, and animations. This may look animated, but it's actually gameplay footage of a game you did not create, which means it's not allowed. Do you have anything animated that you've created yourself that you can submit? :)

[Got Talent España 'El Tekila']

Sad animation attempt in Newgrounds. Yeah, this site is for animations, not ripped videos, bro.

[Lol]

No lol.

[Please do not blam this one!]

Actually, that's the way it works here. If your submission gets a good score, it stays. If it does not, then it gets blammed and that just means you need to keep working to improve. However, this site is not for 10 year olds. You might want tu load it onto a memory card or thumb drive to show to your class.

[2014 Hell Hill Manor Haunt]

You must be new around here. Hi, and welcome to Newgrounds! :) Now, you do know that Newgrounds is a site for animation and games, right? Yeah, there's a reason that the other things you see on here are drawn.

The occasional 'real video' does come thru, but the score usually suffers here, because we prefer to stick to animations and games.

If it's not already, then I suggest you upload this to sites like Youtube or Vimeo and see how you do there, but Newgrounds prefers to showcase animated material. Do you have anything animated you could submit? :)