Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[saber kid]

Your animation is about 1 second long! Please don't submit small, pointless items. Your submission should have characters and a plot and music, and should be finished before you submit it. Make it a whole, complete, finished item that's really good before you submit it. This is good, and it has sound, but there's no story, no plot, no length, no point to the submission. You did good on this, but it's nowhere near what it needs to be in order to stay here on Newgrounds.

spriter500 responds:

thank you for the advice

[#3---"Pillow"]

Please put more time into your animations.

Yes, I know they're 1-hour animations.

Please put more time into your animations.

pizzabagel18 responds:

Ok. Understood. I will put ones later in the series then. I know these aren't good animations, It's started out just to get faster. But I appreciate any feedback, so thanks.

[Space Babies]

Please send a message to Wade and request your account to be closed. :)

If you don't want "Youtube poop," then why would you submit this?? :\

Detectonomicon responds:

The main difference is that YouTube poop rarely has animation in it, and my video actually has a lot of it.

[run cycle]

It works. But it's a run cycle and nothing more.

For what it it, I would say- good job. :) 3/10

As far as remaining on the site, though, I've got to say that it's lacking. :\ 0/5

Newgrounds is for finished items. BUt people have been submitting tests, demos, parts, bits, and such for so long that it's started to get thru, and now people don't know what to do. This is a good example. It's good, so should it get blammed? It's not a story, a finished animation, a completed project; it's a mostly finished loop. Should it stay on here with the finished items? This is too good to feel good about blamming, but it's totally lacking in what it needs to stay.

It passed, so it'll stay, but please only submit finished items. This will forever be an unfinshed bit floating around here, since you won't ever finish it. You'll upload the finished item as a new file, and we'll have both here.

And that's one of the biggest problems Newgrounds has now. Unfinished bits and what to do with them. :\

pencilfreak responds:

Ok thanks it's just a run cycle but thats what i intended it to be :) i was testing out flash as im learning abut the program for future jobs, as for uploading it, like i said i'm new to the site and have no idea what is or is not allowed on here but as they excepted it surly its ok but if everyone on here feels that way then i probably won't upload any animation test's as i don't have time to do the standard flash animation styled polished work you see on here.

[Blow My Whistle Redux]

I miss the good ol' days of Newgrounds whistle blowing.

Where has our Newgrounds gone?? :'(

[Super Slumber Party]

No. Please don't.

Animations are great, so please do more. But as for this, please don't.

[Onision Has Spoken!]

If I don't want to watch it on Youtube, I don't really want to watch an animated version on Newgrounds either, y'know? Sorry. :\

IN-the-trees responds:

It's not an animated version, it's an animated parody. Y'know?