Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Troll Science: Run Faster]

You actually had a passing score from me until you put that song in at the end. Who makes a song like that? And who uses something like that?! It isn't funny at all. Really. It's shameful and disgusting!

[Gabriel Gory - Episode 3]

The baby talk is annoying and zapped a good amount of your score. The voice sound killed the rest if it. Your microphone works, but YOU do not know how to use IT. Properly, anyway. Here, watch this:

http://www.newgrou nds.com/portal/view/590285 (remove the space)

That will help your voice acting sound quality. Your stuff needs a lot of work, but it's easiest to tackle one thing at a time. Watch that one and start improving the quality of the voice first. Then you can start on the rest of what needs to be done to make these viewable.

[..abandoned utopia..]

Minimalist, and actually pretty cool. :)

Punisher responds:

Thank you for actually understanding the concept. :)

[The Karnage Incident]

Awesome! Even without color. :)

[Shadow's death]

The music was awesome. Where are the music credits?

viridxer2 responds:

The music is called brothers from fullmetal alchemist. ^_^

[a flash for blazingdragon]

The music was nice, but the "flash" was boring! There was no color, no pictures, nothing. It would've been better to have a peaceful picture (your drawings, not a photo grabbed from google) at one side and have the words scrolling on the other side. For example, a tree with falling leaves, next to a peaceful stream. The leaves slowly fall as the text scrolls. Maybe have several pictures as the flash proceeds. Start with a flower, and have it bloom. Then go to the beach and have waves. Then go to the tree with the leaves falling. Have the text be a nice, gentle, but easy to read font. Anything too complex may make it hard to read.

Also, be aware if your spelling. You wanna know what happens when you submit poorly spelled text? People read it just like this: (remove space)

http://www.newgroun ds.com/portal/view/558516

Hope that helps. :)

xXSuperSandWaylleXx responds:

As I said. Short movie. Just to show my feelings

[Meet The Great Deku Tree]

It's not bad, actually.

Here's a tutorial by Jazza: (remove spaces if necessary)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eqQIZL n_zng&feature=related

I recommend this to many people, and since you said you wanted practice, I figured I'd send the link along to you. Jazza's one of the best, so why not learn from the best, right?

If you don't know Jazza, then go here:
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /400974
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /586276
or here:
http://jazza.newgrounds.com/

Hope that helps. :)

Creator-Sama responds:

Not bad? That's great!! I've successfully accomplished my goal!

My Goal: "Do not submit crappy blam-tastic flashes"

Thanks for the links too. I'll get right on that........ as soon as I finish ironing my cat.... *wanders off muttering about fur and wrinkles*

[Real Life FPS]

This is a great idea. Unfortunately, with all the real-life first-person shootings going on nowadays, this game no longer seems appropriate. :\