Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[To My Amazing Girlfriend]

While I'm glad you have a girlfriend, whom you love, I really can't give this video high marks.

The starting screen gave no indication that it was doing anything and ran way too long. As I was about to assume it was stuck or done, it started going. The sprites were very pixelated. The storyline was lite, and the bananas at the end were kinda hard to read, although I know what you were going for. The idea was good, but worked out kinda rough. So all in all, the video was serviceable, but not great.

I also find this to be quite rude and in poor taste, seeing as there are very few people here on Newgrounds who actually have real flesh and blood girlfriends. Not animated, not imaginary, not ponies, but real girlfriends. To rub in the fact that you have a life and a girlfriend really might rub a few around here the wrong way.

Although I'm not impressed with the submission, I'm not offended as some could be. So, am I somewhere in that list? Um... I'll let you know once I get back from Equestria. ;)

IIMikII89 responds:

Haha, don't worry you will always find love in Equestria.

[Pencilmation #30]

Dueling pencil colors... nice one!

[Alone in the Snow]

It doesn't have to be funny. It just has to be good.

This was good. :)

Mozzaliam responds:

Thanks :D

[CHAINS.MOV]

You're not submitting it right. Just like FRANK.MOV, it's just a blank, white screen.

theflyingjmanflash responds:

Oh god, I did not know it was doing that. Please excuse me

[Later...]

There are no time restrictions now. You can finish it.

[MeowGuard 9000]

I can't improve the comedy, but I can offer something to improve the sound:

http://www.newground s.com/portal/view/590285 (remove the space)
(...or go find VO in my movie favorites, currently at #13)

It's short and fun and it'll really make a difference in your audio.