Exedor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Christofer Drew]

Not as good as Robert Downey, but better than Pokemon.

Also, try to take the pictures right-side-up, not angled. You want to show the picture, not the not-the-picture. :)

acillustrations responds:

I'll try to post better pictures of my drawings. :)

[Sandshrew]

Gotta draw 'em all!

Gerkinman responds:

What kind of Pokemon are you? How do you do the things you do?

[TM 2- Sweet Tooth]

Twisted Metal 2!! Yeeeaahhhh. :D

I refuse to sell my copy! :D

Needs some background, butit's good.

Michael2882 responds:

Never let it go brotha! And well as for the background it was either white or black since anything else I feel would detract from the piece.=)

[Unknown]

There's an awful amount of white space in your work. That makes them look unfinished. :\

Michael2882 responds:

I'm barely good at character and backgrounds? Psh I suck at those! But thanks for the honesty friend!=D

[Corrupted Haunt]

The lower part is nicely detailed, and the top part has detail and interest... but the middle seems a bit ...unfinished and plain. It seems to be a landscape of gradients with no detail. The gradients seem very plain. The contrast is really high. The lights are light, and the darks are very dark, maybe a bit too much. It needs some texture or detailing to make it lighter, brighter, and make this section fit into the rest of the composition just a bit smoother.

Personally, I like to see color, but if it's a black & white comic, color isn't an option, but it makes the contrast more important.

Ethaneth responds:

This is quite possibly the most fair critique I've gotten, thank you!

The Haunt from the actual comic is very plain, and made with light gradiants. I wanted it to resemble it in the corrupted version, hence why it's like that. I sort've wanted all of the attention to go to the middle parts of the piece, but I fear in doing so I sacrificed the rest of it to the realm of bland and boring.

[mehlettelponeh]

Dood! This is quite a drop in quality from your other stuff. You might want to step it up a bit.

Your other stuff was interesting and all, but this one's kinda rough. :\

Have you got anything like your Robot Day submissions in the works?

VidGameDude responds:

Looks like someone didn't read the description.

[Assault mech]

As interestin as these are, where's the color? It's really lacking without it. It just is unfinished and grey.

Zanroth responds:

Like I said: materials coming soon.

[Psyber Hotspot]

It's actually pretty good. I like this probably the most, or amoung the top of your work. The green boogers coming out of her nose are not desireable, though. You may want to re-color those, although nose piercings (and face piercings in general) like that are kinda yucky anyway. :)

MAKOMEGA responds:

maybe she grabbed a cyber flu by the internet that is why boogers is drained from her nose.
I had realized that look like snot but leave it and thank for the review lol

[Spear]

I like it. She looks good. The main issue I have, though is the lack of background. Even adding a color to the back will do. BUt having a nice drawing on a plain, white backgrounds really makes it seem unfinished.

Good work. Make more. Get rid of the white space. :)

Cenaf responds:

thanks i ll keep that in mind