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[Easy There]

Here's some shells! Shoot him! ... Shootim! Shootim! Shootim! Shootim! D:

[SCDF Sprites Ver. 0.1]

These are not sprites. Sprites are those pixelated characters from video games. They must be in that pixelated style to be considered sprites.

As for these drawing, watch how people work. When you run, you never put that front leg straight out. It's always bent to some degree until it's starting the forward push. That forward push is the leg straightening out. The back leg bends as you bring it up front.

Also, watch your size on these pics. This is 4000 pixels, and that's so large that it takes forever to load.

Skruskie responds:

Well, I use a mac, so I don't have the experience of it taking forever.

But thx for the tip!

[Pikachu]

Pika-cute. :)

hhoulding responds:

Sure is :)

[WHY?!COSMO,WHYY?!]

Some of your work is WAY cute! But choppy pieces like this one (and The Maggie Doll) really scare people away from your portfolio. Something to think about. ;)

[Bubz]

Is this a response to Labraxadores' stupid comment? (And by extension, SimplyRobot's too.)

(Mine wasn't meant to be rude.)

:)

[Color compliment Study 1: self]

Orange is ok. Make it in pink, mauve, or a light shade of purple, and then we'll wonder.

[Poke-punk's team]

The picture looks awesome, and yet, it's way too big! It's taking forever to load, and is 4x the size of my screen (in dimensions). At full size, all I get is a white screen cuz only the upper corner is visible. The dude on that thing's head almost fills my screen. It's nice to zoom in, but you want it to be with a magnifier, not a microscope. ;)

sketchnate responds:

I fixed it :D I didn't think anyone would zoom in, but it's smaller now

[Paris Dawn]

NIce! I like this one! :)

Try to keep the dimensions to where they fit within the screen, or pretty close. It's nice to have the ability to get a closer look, but you want it to be a closer look with a magnifier, not a microscope. This one isn't horribly bad, but when I bring it to full size, I only get a screen full of the tower. That's a wee bit close.

It's a common situation. Many people submit large to overly-large dimensions. I adjusted mine to just lower than my screen's dimensions so that it was visible, but nothing was off-screen.

I saw one where the guy submitted a piece that was over 8000 pix wide. It was so large it not only couldn't be seen, but it slowed the computer when trying to scroll around. x)

I like this one. She's cute, and this is well done. I look forward to seeing more from you. :)

Zcheio responds:

This is really really helpful :) Thank you for the suggestions!

[Promis]

So cute. :3

TextureAnimate responds:

Thanks. My next one im working on should look better than the cherry blossom one. Ive been learning some new techniques. :)

[Pacific Rim]

Want.

To.

See!

D:

Wavechan responds:

Go go go!!! :D