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...and it should probably stay there.

Newgrounds is for animations and games, preferably good ones. This is 30 seconds of boredom. Sorry. :\

This is not the site for you.

HAW!! xD

I had to watch that twice!

...and then come back and review! XD

What you have is good. From what you have here, I can tell that once you start producing real, full animations, I know you'll be making some really great stuff!

With that being said, please don't submit tests to the Portal. If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

shermdraw responds:

Thanks for the heads up - I'm a newbie for sure, so knowing the way things work in NGrounds, and where to post things is a good thing. I'll submit my further tests in the D grounds.

What you have is way too fast, and there's not enough to it, which makes it kinda pointless to submit.

Being new at flash is fine. We all start there. Go to my most recent news post for tips and tutorials that might be helpful.

With that being said, please don't submit tests to the Portal. If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

Good luck! :)

PrimeKB responds:

Thanks for not bashing me and well, I suppose I'll have to do something bout this then.

Don't forget the music credits. You promised!!

:)

TheRealNat23 responds:

Added in now!

This isn't really an animation. There's no story, no music, no color, no background. It's more art, and yet, it's still lacking there as well. It's not finished enough really for either catagory. Please don't submit things that aren't finished. It's a waste of everyone's time to do such things. Who wants to watch unfinished animations or view unfinished art, y'know?

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

NG link: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-i nformation/content-submission

Good luck! :)

slaurak555 responds:

Thank you this is very helpful! I apologize for my ignorance I'm still getting used to this site. Thanks for being nice about it though, won't happen again!

It's a decent walk cycle. ...but it's a walk cycle, nothing more. I mean, he walks. That's it. There's no story, no music, no color, no background. That's not finished enough. Please don't submit things that aren't finished. It's a waste of everyone's time to do such things. Who wants to watch unfinished animations, y'know?

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

NG link: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-i nformation/content-submission

Good luck! :)

Actually, no. Please don't submit things that aren't finished. It's a waste of everyone's time to do such things. Who wants to watch unfinished animations, y'know? I mean, that guy's got no body! That's not finished enough.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

NG link: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-i nformation/content-submission

Good luck! :)

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