Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[EVIKA]

I really want to like this game.

-It has potential.
-The music is great.
-Where are the INSTRUCTIONS?
-Once I get the wings, I can do stuff, but are there other things once the wing time runs out, or do I have to die at that point?
-If I'm defenseless and I have to die once the wings run out, then that's annoying. I should be able to do SOMETHING once the wings run out.
-The graphics are great, but the foreground stuff blocks the view of my character and causes me to get hit and hurt needlessly, which is annoying. It also blocks the view of powerups.
-Are there life powerups?

Please, please, please fix these things, cuz this could be a great game!

kin4n responds:

Hi :) It s an oldstyle shooter Gameplay, you have to understand the patterns to otimize you survival, in next coming update, you will have life power ups and the ability to save 1 wing on the side; in cqse of you really hqve no chance to survive;

Thank you for your comments and your advices, it means a lot :) The foreground is here to annoy you and to force you to asses the trajectory of the upcoming bullets; and I don t want to spoil the level 2, but it s definitely harder lol.

[Extinct Multiplayer TEST]

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the games or movies are completed? Think about it.

This is nowhere near ready to go up, and the Portal is not a test area. Normally tests can go in the forums, but not this type. :\

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

[Platbox]

Isn't this a tutorial or template?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it might be removed.

This has been submitted MANY times by others before you.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[Uwe the Game]

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the games or movies are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[The Lost Ball - PreDev]

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

[JUMP]

Isn't this a tutorial or template?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it might be removed.

This has been submitted MANY times by others before you.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

[Ironpants]

Wow. That's one stiff difficulty curve.

[The Adventure?]

The problem with it is that it's a tutorial or template.

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it might be removed.

This has been submitted MANY times by others before you, albeit in a more basic form. The music was nice. :)

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck.

...one suggestion, UP to jump!

DarkPrinceVI responds:

What template are you mentioning? Because I made this game and designed all the levels and art myself. Absolutely every single thing in this game is something I made and I didn't use a tutorial or template. I opened stencyl, I went to blank game and I started from scratch making this whole thing myself. The only game this is actually based off of is someone elses game in the sense that mario is similar to megaman, and it also contains elements of a previous game I made. So please before giving me a bad score next time, know what you're talking about. I don't mind bad scores but being told I'm a thief for something I made makes me very concerned.

[Run and Gun (Demo)]

Isn't this a tutorial or template?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it might be removed.

This has been submitted MANY MANY MANY OMGFM MANY times by others before you.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck.

...one suggestion, UP to jump!

[Mallow Panic(Demo)]

Isn't this a tutorial or template?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it might be removed.

This has been submitted MANY times by others before you.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck.