Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Picolour]

The game went straight to the "Level Failed" screen each time.

Please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[Blots 'n' Crafts]

This game could be fun, but there's not enough time to move things around, nor are there any instructions. :\

OneManSam responds:

Hey Exedor, thanks for playing my game! The lack of instructions was certainly a design risk I took with this game, trying to have it self-teaching in the vein of old games like Mario and Tetris. If there was something in particular you found confusing, I'd love to know, as I'd like the game mechanics to be as intuitive as possible.

I'm also curious about where you felt the time pressure, since the game is designed to give you unlimited time to make each move. So obviously, if there's something that's making players feel pressured, then I'll have to fix that! =)

Thank you for taking the time to give me feedback!

Edit: After thinking about it, I've decided to add a simple how-to-play screen to the game. I realize that I don't even have the luxury of two minutes for a player to learn my mechanics on an upload site like this. The updated file should contain this short screen. I'd still love to hear about the time pressure comment, though.

[Schoolproject]

If it's unfinished, please don't submit it. :\

[Turn Now - Line Run]

The music is great, but you need a quick overview so people know what;s going on. Also, have the start be straight for just a bit longer before the turns start so people can be ready when they start to come.

[Guy the Runner]

Isn't this the Run-N-Gun tutorial or template?

Please don't submit things that come from tutorials. They count as public files, since they're available to everyone. And when you do tutorials, you're not actually creating your own game. You're following steps to re-create someone else's game, and so, that's why they're actually against the rules. Submissions must be your own creation.

This wasn't bad, as far as it looks decent and the controls work, but it should, since that's what tutorials and templates do. Since it's a public file template or tutorial, it might be removed.

This has been submitted MANY times by others before you.

Keep working at creating things. Just make it all your own.

Good luck. :)

Raror211 responds:

This is just the first release. I plan on changing A LOT in this. I am adding new mobs, limited ammo, with ammo packs, and wayy more.

[Wash Beauty]

Good pictures, but TOO MANY ENEMIES!!

zwltop responds:

Thanks for your suggestion, the enemy split time has been changed

[Cube Fall]

The red bars ruin the game. There's not much space as it is, so add in a red bar and it makes it not fun. Especially since they don't seem to be removable. There was nothing in the instructions about that. Also, 'power bars' were mentioned in the instructions, but were not explained.

The red bars should be removable, like if you build a line on top of it twice, then it breaks and is removed; that sort of thing. But non-removable obstacles ruin the experience.

CodedGames responds:

Great idea with the making a row above them to remove them. I'll think about adding that in the next content update. The only problem I see with that is games could go on forever. I may add a sort of lives system or something like that. Adding information about the red bars into the instructions has been noted. Thanks for playing! Your feedback is highly appreciated.

[Aventuras de Mateus Beta]

What you have hints at something decent in the future, but this is nowhere near ready to be put up. There's just not enough to it yet.

With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[Icons (Alpha 0.7)]

You already submitted this game. Please don't submit a LESS finished version.

[The Impossible Quack]

What the duck is this?! >:\