Exedor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Escape The Creepy Carnival]

The game was good, but auto popups and redirects are not allowed. This one will be removed, and so you might want to remove any of your other games that auto-anything.

[WilyBitOSNetFrame BETA1.0]

This is not ready to be submitted.

[Trumps Awkward HandShakes 2]

Sorry, but Trump games are overdone, overused, and boring. This does nothing to improve that situation.

[Idlers And Dungeons]

It brings up a message saying "You are playing on an unauthorized website..." and opens a popup window if I click. You might want to fix that.

[Concept Game #1]

This game is nowhere near ready to be submitted, bro. It needs a lot more work.

[Guitar Hardness Demo]

Two misses and you're done? That's a little harsh, don't you think? And, you should have some kind of in-game instructions and a "Ready?" message would help. I voted low, but we'll see what the next version is like.

[The Chronicles of Abraham]

The idea is ok, but there are some glaring problems that made it not fun to play.

First, the intro takes too long, and isn't skippable. If you don't want it skippable, make it a click-to-advance event, rather than a timed event.

Second, I walked over the tent, fell off the world, and had to watch the intro again. Going left is the noob test, and this failed.

The hit box for Abraham is too large. I was hitting enemies and getting hurt when they were not touching me. Only on the furthest edge of the strike zone, did I attack and not get hurt myself.

The gold hearts refresh only one life point? That's not enough, especially based on the previous point.

lailsonBr responds:

Thank you for your remark. First of all, I introduced it as a mandatory requirement so that the player could know one of the verses of the Bible and arouse his curiosity in reading the sacred text of God's word.

In the situation of you walking over the tent and falling in the water I released because I found it a little amusing I admit that it was a noob, banal and primary error, but any self-respecting player knows that if you fall in the water you risk drowning. .!

With respect to the area of attack I thought in several ways to solve the problem until throwing some object, but had like that effect of radius and also was a way of the enemy to cause damage to the character when it had collision between both ..!

And in life I put only a small amount to make the game a little more challenging, and spread hearts in several points of the level.

Again thank you ..!

[10 Frames in a life]

Well ...um...

The audio is too quiet in some areas. Seems to get louder as the ...thing progresses.
The voice actor is terribly uninspired and sounds bored.
This is not a game.
This is not an animation; it's a slideshow.
Every time I click on the screen it goes full-screen. Don't do that.

Not sure what the intent was here, but this didn't have a lot of inspiration, and it shows.

ogier87 responds:

Thanks

[Mathsweeper]

So, each mine has a numerical value from 1-4... But what does that have to do with the numbers surrounding the tiles or the numbers on the floor? How do they relate to one another? Some more instruction would help.

[Octo-cannon]

It does not work. It stays on the menu. Maybe a clickable start button, rather than the Enter button, would be better?

DrewJayne responds:

thank you i will work on that for my next game