Exedor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Easter]

She's so cute! <3 :D

baopiiPoo responds:

Thanks:)

[Freedom]

Quickly made, but still very cute! :)

Rrachel-chan responds:

Thank you :)

[Graffiti Tag | Smash]

Do you have anything that's not graffiti? Spraypainting walls is not art.

AlexBlackbook responds:

I have something different ;) Thanks for saying what you think.
Next time i'm going to upload something that is not graffiti

Stay tuned | Alex

[Christofer Drew]

Not as good as Robert Downey, but better than Pokemon.

Also, try to take the pictures right-side-up, not angled. You want to show the picture, not the not-the-picture. :)

acillustrations responds:

I'll try to post better pictures of my drawings. :)

[Sandshrew]

Gotta draw 'em all!

Gerkinman responds:

What kind of Pokemon are you? How do you do the things you do?

[TM 2- Sweet Tooth]

Twisted Metal 2!! Yeeeaahhhh. :D

I refuse to sell my copy! :D

Needs some background, butit's good.

Michael2882 responds:

Never let it go brotha! And well as for the background it was either white or black since anything else I feel would detract from the piece.=)

[Unknown]

There's an awful amount of white space in your work. That makes them look unfinished. :\

Michael2882 responds:

I'm barely good at character and backgrounds? Psh I suck at those! But thanks for the honesty friend!=D

[Edge of Essence]

Hi bud! Well, while I love your other work, this one...not so much. It kinda looks like hair and ...wax or blood. Love your others, though. :)

Alldin responds:

haha everyone has their opinion ofc =) Well this is not really hair or any simple hair function from the program, its actually particles that are animated and forming the shapes of those metalic wires, and additional to that I added some liquid with black/red organic patterns and shapes to it.

In other words, something very abstract =)

[Corrupted Haunt]

The lower part is nicely detailed, and the top part has detail and interest... but the middle seems a bit ...unfinished and plain. It seems to be a landscape of gradients with no detail. The gradients seem very plain. The contrast is really high. The lights are light, and the darks are very dark, maybe a bit too much. It needs some texture or detailing to make it lighter, brighter, and make this section fit into the rest of the composition just a bit smoother.

Personally, I like to see color, but if it's a black & white comic, color isn't an option, but it makes the contrast more important.

Ethaneth responds:

This is quite possibly the most fair critique I've gotten, thank you!

The Haunt from the actual comic is very plain, and made with light gradiants. I wanted it to resemble it in the corrupted version, hence why it's like that. I sort've wanted all of the attention to go to the middle parts of the piece, but I fear in doing so I sacrificed the rest of it to the realm of bland and boring.

[mehlettelponeh]

Dood! This is quite a drop in quality from your other stuff. You might want to step it up a bit.

Your other stuff was interesting and all, but this one's kinda rough. :\

Have you got anything like your Robot Day submissions in the works?

VidGameDude responds:

Looks like someone didn't read the description.