Exedor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Diana]

No. Anyone can get cheap tittie points by drawing with less clothes. The real artists draw like this.

It does need a background and a better icon. Argue with it enough and you can get it to a better icon. :)

CherryLolo responds:

Thanks :)

[The dragon]

Sweet! :D

wartynewt responds:

:) ty!

[Three Monsters]

Remember, peoples' monitors are somewhere between 1280 - 1920 pixels wide, so when the picture is 3456 pixels wide, how much are people going to be able to see? Mine is 1920x1080, and a 25 inch widescreen, but I can only see a yellowish bar and a darker brownish/yellowish bar on my screen!

Another problem with huge pictures is huge file sizes. This is over 7mb, and that's massive. Shrink the picture down and resubmit it so more people can enjoy it.

andymarkantonatos responds:

Are you saying that the entire picture is not visible? That sounds problematic. Thanks very much for letting me know! I'll get on that as soon as I can. I'll check out this artwork you speak of as well.

Edit: I believe I just fixed this, cheers!

[Shy Turn]

Fluttershy! :3

Trebuxet responds:

Isn't cute here? :D

[Into the desert]

Stay together! STAY TOGETHER!! D:

The bad stuff always happens when they separate!! D:

Great pic! :)

wartynewt responds:

Thanks! Haha yeah they're doomed :p

[Character Animation: Dancer]

Remember, you're submitting this to the Art Portal.

This is not art.

sanhueza responds:

This is absolutely art. 3d characters and animation are art.

[Asuka Evangelion]

I haven't seen the show yet, but I thought Rei had the patch...? Very nicely done, tho. :)

DocLew responds:

Thank you!
Rei? Only Asuka in Evangelion 3.0 (:

[Sorceress from Dragon's Crown]

I really like this one! ...with the exception of the staff she's sitting on. With that much hip being shown, and at that angle, the staff would actually be going through the body, instead of the body resting on top of it. Plus, the head of the staff kinda hides behind her, and so at first, it kinda looks like she's got some mean, super long shit taking place. If you could turn the staff head into a broom head, it could extend out past the body and hair and be more visible. ANy way of modifying this one? It's great except for that one detail.

PanRysownik responds:

Hey there! Thanks for pointing it out - I'm well aware of the problems with this picture. It's too much bother to change it now (since it's a few months old) - I'll just drawher again in the future, this time remembering where the staff should be - it's always a lesson for me. :)

[The Wish]

I really like this picture, well, what I can see of it anyway.

Unfortunately, the one thing I've got to complain about is the size. This is so large that

1. the huge file size is taking forever to load. When I noticed that it wasn't popping right up, I saw the filesize and hit my stopwatch. At 8 minutes of loading, it had loaded only to the bottom of his sleeve. I started typing this at 8 minutes, and it's now 11:44 and his lower foot isn't visible yet. This isn't with a dial-up modem, either, I've got a cable modem. At almost 30 mb, that's waaaay too large! :\ Done. Total time: 14 minutes, 40 seconds, not counting the time before I hit my stopwatch.

2. it can't be seen. In 'small form' it can. But if I bring it up to full size, I can only see a small portion of the upper left corner. I've got a 25-inch monitor and can only get half of the width of this on my screen. I can see lots of light and dark brown, and a small triangle of blue in the lower corner when I bring this to full size.

I love your work, as you know, and this isn't me ragging on you. People actually do this a lot. They forget about the resolution sizes on peoples' monitors. Mine is 1920x1080, so at 3850 wide, I can get about half the width on-screen, but only 20% of the 5016 pixel height. So please, if you would, please shrink the size down on this one. Just 'edit' the submission and submit a smaller version with a smaller file.

I really like this one! :D It's just massive! D: Five stars for the picture, half penalty, though, for the load time and size. :\

I hope this info helps. :)

radioactiveroach responds:

I'll upload a smaller file, thanks for letting me know.

[Treasures]

This is an awesome picture! My biggest suggestion, tho, is be aware of your size! This is HUGE, and not in a good way. My resolution is 1920x1080, but at 4960 pixels wide, I can't get even half of this one my screen. Even with a 25 inch widescreen monitor, all I get is a red stripe thru the middle of my monitor, and that's it. Plus, loading time was long due to the large file size.

Great picture, but try to shrink it down about 50%. :)

Dwarfbluefart responds:

I'm glad you liked. And thanks for the heads-up, i really didn't pay that much attention to the size. I shrink it to 1920x1358. See if it loads better now.