Exedor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sorceress from Dragon's Crown]

I really like this one! ...with the exception of the staff she's sitting on. With that much hip being shown, and at that angle, the staff would actually be going through the body, instead of the body resting on top of it. Plus, the head of the staff kinda hides behind her, and so at first, it kinda looks like she's got some mean, super long shit taking place. If you could turn the staff head into a broom head, it could extend out past the body and hair and be more visible. ANy way of modifying this one? It's great except for that one detail.

PanRysownik responds:

Hey there! Thanks for pointing it out - I'm well aware of the problems with this picture. It's too much bother to change it now (since it's a few months old) - I'll just drawher again in the future, this time remembering where the staff should be - it's always a lesson for me. :)

[Kanna Albeecht lenceria]

Ella se ve enojado! ¿Qué he hecho esta vez?! D:

She looks angry! What did I do this time?! D:

:)

[ani-ME]

...don't judge?

But, that's what we do here. Great pic. :)

[The Wish]

I really like this picture, well, what I can see of it anyway.

Unfortunately, the one thing I've got to complain about is the size. This is so large that

1. the huge file size is taking forever to load. When I noticed that it wasn't popping right up, I saw the filesize and hit my stopwatch. At 8 minutes of loading, it had loaded only to the bottom of his sleeve. I started typing this at 8 minutes, and it's now 11:44 and his lower foot isn't visible yet. This isn't with a dial-up modem, either, I've got a cable modem. At almost 30 mb, that's waaaay too large! :\ Done. Total time: 14 minutes, 40 seconds, not counting the time before I hit my stopwatch.

2. it can't be seen. In 'small form' it can. But if I bring it up to full size, I can only see a small portion of the upper left corner. I've got a 25-inch monitor and can only get half of the width of this on my screen. I can see lots of light and dark brown, and a small triangle of blue in the lower corner when I bring this to full size.

I love your work, as you know, and this isn't me ragging on you. People actually do this a lot. They forget about the resolution sizes on peoples' monitors. Mine is 1920x1080, so at 3850 wide, I can get about half the width on-screen, but only 20% of the 5016 pixel height. So please, if you would, please shrink the size down on this one. Just 'edit' the submission and submit a smaller version with a smaller file.

I really like this one! :D It's just massive! D: Five stars for the picture, half penalty, though, for the load time and size. :\

I hope this info helps. :)

radioactiveroach responds:

I'll upload a smaller file, thanks for letting me know.

[Treasures]

This is an awesome picture! My biggest suggestion, tho, is be aware of your size! This is HUGE, and not in a good way. My resolution is 1920x1080, but at 4960 pixels wide, I can't get even half of this one my screen. Even with a 25 inch widescreen monitor, all I get is a red stripe thru the middle of my monitor, and that's it. Plus, loading time was long due to the large file size.

Great picture, but try to shrink it down about 50%. :)

Dwarfbluefart responds:

I'm glad you liked. And thanks for the heads-up, i really didn't pay that much attention to the size. I shrink it to 1920x1358. See if it loads better now.

[Shiny Bunnelby]

Her eyes are scary, but other than that, this is a great pic. :) ...oh, well, more of a background would be nice, too. It just looks incomplete with white.

[Year Walk]

Very nice!

Bippo responds:

Thank you! :)

[Winter]

Very nice! Why the :(?

ThePutamen responds:

Thank you! I was too lazy to write a description :D

[Narumi Tanaka ass]

Estas chicas tienen mucho problemas para mantener sus vestidos a quedarse abajo! xD

Bien! :)

[Headdress]

This is a very complex piece. Nice. :)