Exedor's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Warrior Girl]

I like it. However, I can't give it a good mark, seeing as its got so much white space. it comes off as an unfinished piece. I'd love to see this finished; give her hands and legs and a background. It's one thing to draw a picture, but you can do so much more: tell a story with your image. I look forward to seeing this one again. ;)

Bribou99 responds:

Thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it!! Though the picture was just something I had fun sketching, you are right and it does seem to be incomplete. I think I’m going to follow your advice and add more to it and make it look much more finished. Again, thank you. :)

[Sailor Milky Way]

Pickletoez is back! Welcome back, Mel! :3 Oh yes, please revisit. This is fantastic work. :)

[Coffee drawing ! #2]

Ok, these are darn cool, bro.

Shayxy responds:

Well, thank you, happy you find them cool !

[my purple angel]

Actually, it's great. However, it looks unfinished. Finish the feet/legs, leave the wings as they are, and add [change it to] arms and hands. Then tell me what you think. :)

[Suicidal Depression]

Fantastic work; powerful piece.

[Catank]

It's really good! The amount of white space makes it seem unfinished, tho. Add some grey and brown texture, or even a blur under it all and it'll add that finishing touch. :)

[just trying]

She's very cute. The excess of white space makes it seem unfinished. Add a doorframe and some slight texture and color and it'll be fine. :)

kacenace responds:

Thank you.
The white excess are not a part of a picture. I painted this like a bookmark. Perhaps, I should use higher resolution.

[Helps me get over my ex]

If she looked like that, I might actually start paying attention to her. Well done!

Alissandra responds:

Yeah, I painted her looking a bit different than she looks in the upcoming movie, I'm feeling nostalgic for the old cartoons :) Thank you for the comment!

[margaret the seasnake]

The linework is great. It needs color, tho. I don't understand the M rating.

deadmen23-3 responds:

i dunno i though bare breast is consider as nudity on this site i'll change it but yeah the picture wasn't mean't to have color because it's just a nice line art.

[Slopes of lope]

How very cute! :)

bimshwel responds:

Thank you! That is my first comment here! I wasn't sure how it would go.