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[いつ描いたか覚えてない子達。| enigi09]

8分後にご飯が作られ、黒猫さんの状況は一変しました。

The rice was ready 8 minutes later, and the situation changed drastically for Mr Cat-san.

[主人奴隷コンビ。健全 | enigi09]

可愛い <3 :)

Cute. <3 :3

[Tonya with coconut]

Tonya ...wasting food.

Dammit, woman, don't you know we're stuck on this island for who knows how long, and look what you did! Look. What. You. Did.

[Into the Breach 17]

She DOES have a point, there.

[Stella's Unique Introduction]

How cute! <3

[Pizza Topping Girls: Pinap-chan]

Pina-chan

[Cat on a chair]

Such a cute cat!

owlh responds:

Thanks!

[Janices]

She's so cute. I like the variety, too.

Catinyt responds:

Thanks!!

[the nostalgic Adventure page 3]

The text on the girl's speech bubble is a good font, and could be slightly larger. Both of the dad fonts are hard to read. The white is a compact font, that's readable, but not as easy as her text. The outlined red/black, tho, is difficult to read, even when zoomed in. More help for ya. :)

[the nostalgic Adventure page 4 remastered]

This image is way too big, on every level. A size of 6000 x 9000 pixels means it's larger than the screen, which makes your viewers have to scroll around the screen to find the story and to figure out that's going on. Your other images at 1961 x 2773 px are better.

However, the text is waaaay too small. In the image above, the text bubble for the dad is about the size of his eyes, and there's no way anyone's going to be able to read that without zooming to full size. This applies to your other images as well; they all need some adjustment in image and/or text sizes.

Edit: MUCH better. :)

Mralfred responds:

I fix it