That was actually pretty good, considering it was all pencil. :)
That was actually pretty good, considering it was all pencil. :)
Charcoal :p but thanks for the review!
As awesome as the art and animation are, this is way too short. People are going to think you borrowed and modified from the actual show. :\ Try to make it longer, or better yet, make the ful animation before submitting it. No one likes part of a story, no matter how cool it looks.
thank you this comment alone has restored my faith in animating but the anime hasnt gotten this far yet
Hi, and welcome to Newgrounds. It's always a good idea to hang out on a site and learn about it before submitting anything.
Now, you do know that Newgrounds is for animation and games, right?
The occasional 'real video' does come thru, but the score usually suffers here, because we prefer to stick to animations and games.
This is video, and so this is better suited for youtube. :\
Hi, and welcome to Newgrounds. It's always a good idea to hang out on a site and learn about it before submitting anything.
Now, you do know that Newgrounds is for animation and games, right?
The occasional 'real video' does come thru, but the score usually suffers here, because we prefer to stick to animations and games.
This is video, and so this is better suited for youtube. :\
No Jblixi haan btooran axen youtube. Nil Newgrounds.
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This is a loop.
Loops go in circles.
Circles are round.
I gave you a round score. :)
Yay! Iz been waitin' for this! :D
That was awesome! Quite the inventive story! :D
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
What you have is good, but there's not enough to it, which makes it kinda pointless.
If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.
http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission
Good luck! :)
Actually, it wasn't bad. I doubt, you'll win any awards for it, but I know you're not surprised by that comment. I liked the colors of the galaxy you drew better than the one I drew. I've got tips and tutorials in my most recent news post that maybe might be helpful. Keep improving. You're off to a good start already. :)
thanks for the coment
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