Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Dot of Excellence 45 SE]

Please do not resubmit items that have been blammed by the Newgrounds community, or have been removed previously by the Newgrounds Moderation team.

[Strawberryclock's Clock Day Vacation [CD15]]

No Strawberryclock anywhere? Fail.

ChandlerThompson responds:

Happy Clock Day to you too!

[quick teaser trailer]

It was almost good. Too short, tho. Keep at it!! :D

brodybehere responds:

agreed and thank you for your reveiw

[Clip: "Nightmare" - THE COFFIN FOOTAGE]

An hour and 10 minutes and live footage...? If it was all animated, that'd still be a looooong time, but it might have a chance. Otherwise, it really doesn't sound appealing. :\

[Virtual Out Of Body Experience]

...is this some kind of subliminal shit? ...or just regular shit? This is not Newgrounds material. You should know that by now. :\

LASERBEAST responds:

it's ASMR which apparently NG hasn't heard of. It invokes brain tingles with waveform algorithms if you turn off the lights and wear headphones. Problem with NG users is they are all 11 year-olds with no clue about this kind of stuff.

[Taktikal Master]

Looks like there might be a decent story here. ...eventually, anyway. This hints at possibly something good from you in the future. For now, tho, it's nowhere near ready to be put up.

With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[Mathematical Messiah - Earth Sun Moon Light 18 27 36 45]

Unfortunately, it's a bunch of pictures of numbers, and was not interesting at all. This site generally revolves around animated content, of which, this had none (other than the Movie Maker transition effects). :\

MathematicalMessiah responds:

I haven't been much of the type to blend in with the crowd. I prefer to be unique. Perhaps despite your disinterest, I may earn other people's interest in time, just as famous people today were rejected by critics that weren't very thoughtful towards the uniqueness of their projects. So instead they rejected them based on what they expected as a critic, not what they expected as an artist.

[MIDEY MOVIE]

With a little work, this could be good. As it is, it's still very unfinished, tho. And don't add live action; no one here wants it. Notice how most everything else around here is drawn? Yeah, there's a reason for that. Newgrounds has always been about animation. Add live action and it'll kill your score.

CHEAPTOONS responds:

I know that I won't put live action in NEWSGROUNDS ...I was reassuring that there will be another version soon of this character in youtube and above all thank you for you feed back !!!

[Aki Running]

It's not bad, and you did good animating it, but it's 5 seconds of running and that's it. It's kinda pointless to submit bits and pieces, y'know? The Portal is for finished items, so I rated good, but couldn't score well. Sorry.

spoonybard13 responds:

I never animated anything else around it, so technically it is finished, but I understand your viewpoint. This was mostly just a practice animation because I've never done one before, and perhaps it would have been better to upload something with a bit more substance. BTW, no need to be sorry. I welcome constructive criticism.

[Marleen's Dance]

Not much of a dance, but it is very cute. :)

Bertn1991 responds:

Well, I appreciate your honesty... and kindness! Thank you : )