Exedor's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Taktikal Master]

Looks like there might be a decent story here. ...eventually, anyway. This hints at possibly something good from you in the future. For now, tho, it's nowhere near ready to be put up.

With that being said, please don't submit tests or unfinished things to the Portal. If people submit unfinished things, then this will become an unimpressive site. Would you hang out on a site where none of the movies or games are completed? Think about it.

If you want feedback, tips, and ideas, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

The Portal isn't for tests or unfinished submissions, tho: http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission

Good luck. :)

[MIDEY MOVIE]

With a little work, this could be good. As it is, it's still very unfinished, tho. And don't add live action; no one here wants it. Notice how most everything else around here is drawn? Yeah, there's a reason for that. Newgrounds has always been about animation. Add live action and it'll kill your score.

CHEAPTOONS responds:

I know that I won't put live action in NEWSGROUNDS ...I was reassuring that there will be another version soon of this character in youtube and above all thank you for you feed back !!!

[Marleen's Dance]

Not much of a dance, but it is very cute. :)

Bertn1991 responds:

Well, I appreciate your honesty... and kindness! Thank you : )

[The adventures of Celrii & Cumbi (Part One)]

Don't use photos as your backgrounds. It's considered cheating in animation circles. No matter how good the animated parts, your score will still suffer for it. ;)

RobertLowe responds:

Thank you for your comment, i will take note of this! :)